Contest Typography Design - $30

Hey DP,

I tried making a basic typography image, but it's just not right, I'm not a designer but I've made some examples of what I need, and attached them here - it's basically Darth Vader with the text:

"The Serial Number on Darth Vader's Suit of Armor was E-3778Q-1"

The design must be unique, and a the winner will have to submit a vector.

- Must include red lightsaber (with or without glow)
- No Shading/shadows
- All colors should be in RGB.
- Backgrounds must be transparent.
- Photos are not allowed.
- Must be YOUR own design.

This competition will close on 29 April - 2PM GMT
Payment will be made via PayPal.

If you have any further questions, please feel free to comment here or drop me a pm.

I look forward to seeing your designs, can't wait to see how your amazingly creative minds impress me!

Thanks
Luke

 

Hello, i will be submitting mine soon

 

Hi Luke, when is your closing date?

 

29 April - hope you'll be entering!

 

Yes, will for sure!

 

@Tarcea Sergiu - Thanks for your submission.

I think it looks a little strange with some of text, like the extra blackness around 'The' - plus it kind of looks like he's only got one arm...
Also, to me it looks like the main focus word in your design is 'on', which doesn't look right.

Also, to everyone else, this contest will be closing on 29 April - 2PM GMT.

Please get your designs in soon!
Thanks

 

kindly see the attached design, Hope u ll love it, Feedback appreciated

 

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My try hope you like it...

 

@dhamaka Thanks for your submission - There's a few things that could be changed, firstly, the ligtsaber doesn't really fit in anywhere - it looks like it's not really being held. Also I think the letters need some more adjustment's, the easiest part for me to read & see is the word 'was' - which isn't the word I'd like to stand out.

@getdomain4u I like your style on this one - definitely the most original so far! I like the fonts you've used, however I feel like the overall shape doesn't really resemble Darth Vader enough - the head is great, just the body shape & feet look a little strange... hope you'll be happy to make some revisions on this!

@Uttam logos Thanks for your submission, however it's not really what I'm looking for, it looks very basic, with standard fonts, colors & shapes, sorry!

@weirdXtreme - I like the idea you have here, especially the lightsaber & hands... but you seem to be missing a word... 'of'.
Vader's is missing the 's -- also I think 'was' is way too big... "Darth Vader's" should stand out more than 'was'.
I also think the head would look better without the face details

@Gorgon - I'm not too sure about the hand, it makes the above 'o' look like an 8 - Also I think some of the letters needs a little extra spacing.


Thanks for all your submissions, remember the contest closes in less than 24 hours so please make any revisions you feel are necessary, and to everyone else - I won't be picking a winner until the contest has ended - so you've still got time!

 

Thanks for the feed back sir here the revision...

 

Revision

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@weirdXtreme That's much better - thanks for your revisions!

 

another one:

 

wait for my entry.