Typo? I can't find the stinkin' typo!

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by jhkoenig, Jun 6, 2011.

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    I received feedback from a visitor that my site had a typo on the home page.

    Now I'm not the best grammarian in the world, but I can't find a typo on the home page.

    Can you? Thanks!
     
    jhkoenig, Jun 6, 2011 IP
  2. mihaidamianov

    mihaidamianov Well-Known Member

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    After reading half page my eyes died because of all the colors. The good news is that there were no major faults so far :D
     
    mihaidamianov, Jun 6, 2011 IP
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    Fitness Centers >> Fitness Centres
    Weight Loss Centers >> Weight Loss Centres

    You want to go on a hike, not a date. A buddy makes the hike more fun without all the tension and expectations of a date, with far less chance of getting weirded out.
    Not a word...
     
    Guru_101, Jun 6, 2011 IP
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    I didn't see any typos... but you might want to make the wording sound more professional if you want more users.
     
    smashylee, Jun 9, 2011 IP
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    none so far, i think you have to check out a proof reader
     
    labraintellekt, Jun 9, 2011 IP
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    I don't think it's the grammar error. It's the layout and color of the page, it kinda makes me dizzy. maybe you could try a more simple and better layout page.
     
    woody allen, Jun 9, 2011 IP
  7. Hecky

    Hecky Like a Dungeon Dragon!

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    I think you're using your English quite loosely, for example : "But who wants to hike alone?". Personally, I wouldn't start a sentence with 'but'.
     
    Hecky, Jun 10, 2011 IP