Translated SMS need your review before launch

Discussion in 'Websites' started by TheSyndicate, Nov 17, 2007.

  1. #1
    I need a review on SEO – Layout – Idea – and everything else you can thing of from this new SMS translate site.

    It will Translate English to Thai and in a few days Thai to English as well.

    1 dollar per SMS to Thailand translated.

    I did the site in a week with a very basic admin

    Looks ok to launch?

    SMS Thailand
     
    TheSyndicate, Nov 17, 2007 IP
  2. janvv

    janvv Peon

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    It looks clean and crisp. I like it.

    The news feed seems to be broken though and the error message breaks the page layout. Perhaps look into this and make it so that even when there is an error message it keeps your layout intact.

    Another point of improvement is the signup button. It just isn't right and doesn't match the rest of your form elements. Perhaps make it have a single solid white line instead of the usual button look.

    Other than that it looks set to go. Alot of success with the site.
     
    janvv, Nov 17, 2007 IP
  3. TheSyndicate

    TheSyndicate Prominent Member

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    yeah i know i told my webmaster to fix the button and he has no taste :) I need some other way to feed the wordpress on the template maggie is not working, thanks for the advice
     
    TheSyndicate, Nov 17, 2007 IP
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    Lhlalyam Well-Known Member

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    Hello Yellowberry.

    Good to see you post here. I am more than happy to do a review for you. I had a chance to look at your website today.

    My Thoughts

    Logo & Header
    Your logo is simple and good. I would suggest that you include a slogan to go with your logo. Something that describes your site quickly. An example would be: 'English to Thai text messaging translation'

    The lady does depict Thailand very much along with the cell phone for the business.

    In the red column is reads: 'Best Services on the Market'. I was thinking that since you are only offering one service.... it should read: 'Best Service on the Market'.

    Navigation
    Most navigation links seem to work. I did have problems with some of them. They are as follows:

    Thai Translated SMS and Free Translated SMS links
    These two links on the home page just bring you back to the home page.

    PayPal link
    On your home page, your pay pal link only brings you to their home page. I'd suggest creating a paypal form for easy payment for future customers.

    News link
    The top News link button sometimes.... not all the time.... brings up the error as shown below:


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    Send SMS link
    When I click on the Send SMS link at the top... it brings me to the Send SMS page properly.

    I did find problems with the two text links at the bottom of the page. These two links are Contact Us and The Blog. It seems when I click on these, they bring me to a generic WordPress layout.


    Image of the two links:
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    Contact Us link
    the contact us link at the bottom of the page also brings me to a generic wordpress theme page.

    I had to link the image to a new page due to its size:
    [img=http://img30.picoodle.com/img/img30/5/11/17/f_sms4m_1ae7a56.png]


    Send Message Form
    I found some of the text missing on the Send Message Form button. Please see image below:


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    Content
    After going through the site and reading the content, I feel that you need someone to edit your content. I did find spelling errors, grammar errors and improper use of words.

    Conclusion
    Overall, I love the idea your website. I'm curious as to what script you are using for this site. Very well designed!

    This review was done with IE 6.02 on Windows XP SP2 - Toshiba Satellite M70-SR3

    I do hope this review helps you.
    Respectfully,
    Lhlalyam
     
    Lhlalyam, Nov 17, 2007 IP
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    TheSyndicate Prominent Member

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    bloody hell :) that review rocks i will update all this things and yes my gramma suck will ask my girlfriend to take a look at the words green coming your way
     
    TheSyndicate, Nov 17, 2007 IP
  6. Lhlalyam

    Lhlalyam Well-Known Member

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    Hello Again YellowBerry...

    Glad that you found the review useful. I'll keep myself posted for any changes to your site.

    Respectfully,
    Lhlalyam
     
    Lhlalyam, Nov 18, 2007 IP
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    Yes now i did i think a last touch to it please check if you see anything errors :)
     
    TheSyndicate, Nov 23, 2007 IP
  8. Lhlalyam

    Lhlalyam Well-Known Member

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    Hello Again YellowBerry.

    I had a look at the updates and am impressed with the work you have done.

    My Second Look

    Home Page
    I like what you did to the logo and the slogan added. It explains the site better. I would still suggest some slight touch ups to the content. I still find myself having to re-read to understand what you are saying.

    News Page
    There seems to be problems when you open up the News Page. It doesn't happen everytime but it does seem to happen every other time you visit the page.

    This image was shot from the FireFox browser.
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    Contact, Privacy Policy & Terms of Service Pages
    I still find it confusing that these pages open up to a totally different template. It feels like you are going to a different website.... which would lose your clients.

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    PayPal
    It would be good to integrate your PayPal that is in your home page to integrate with your site. Right now it opens a new window... and to PayPal.

    These are my updated thoughts. I hope it helps.

    This 2nd review was done with 2 browsers, FireFox 2.0.0.9 & IE6.02, on Windows XP SP2.

    Respectfully,
    Lhlalyam
     
    Lhlalyam, Nov 24, 2007 IP