To Every Girl on DP - check this

Sounds too fake. I would've thought he copied and pasted it from somewhere. Needs more examples of how he messed up and why he did it and stuff like that.

 

The thing that sucks about the letter is that it's all about you, and how she makes you feel. That's like every lame pop song and it sounds self-centered to me. "I want you, I need you..." so what?
It's a common fallacy that attempting to communicate this (especially so awkwardly) will elicit the same response from her. Your feelings, whatever they may be, are best left a mystery, until you sort out what they are yourself.
Junior-high Byronesque declarations of love only work the first time and if she already returns your feelings. If so, this letter is pointless. Sounds very desperate. And she will not like it unless she is very inexperienced. Most girls hear this kind of crap all day long.

 

Its Chilly in here...

 

i love love letters! do it the old fashion way! we prefer it like that! your is really good... ;D

 

You lost me at "baby". Don't use that unless it's something that you call her on a regular basis and you know she won't mind.

It could be good letter, depending on the nature of your relationship. If you have been dating for a while and are wanting to take it to the next level, then a letter like this would be appropriate.

If you are just friends, and you want to start dating, then this letter might be a bit much. Unless you are 14. Then it's probably typical.

If you are just casual aquaintences and you want to take her out, she may take out a restraining order on you after receiving this...

 

I'm 25

 

This is the poem I wrote to my girlfriend when we were close to breaking up, but we are still together to this day, its almost a year old.

Remember those times that we craved.
when those day's were long, the nights were short
and our hopes were there.
Those day's we had, those nights that we dreamt
were so close ahead, but now forgetten in soul

The luaghs we had, the smiles we exchanged
came from our hearts, with love and passion.
Together we were a perfect couple, an example to all that envyed us.

We fit perfectly in each other's arm's, as though we were meant to be together.
The love you've given me, Im so greatful for it.

I remember those day's, at the beach we spent
the feeling you gave me, only come from one being, you.
Not another girl alive, has shown me this world,
I'd give up my life, I'd give up my soul
to just make you smile.

Our fate had been chosen by the
heavenly angels above
We've given our all
nothing to spare, besides a few tear's
we've kept in our selves.

Our ending been written, our love has been tampered
we look at each other, as a stranger by knowledge.
Your effection's have a vanished, none left for me
your love for me, has been gone for awhile.

I still love you, even though you don't feel the same.
I guess true love can never be erased.

I'll love you till death
till the last pump of blood
to my head it will carry
my last memory arises
the last images I've saved,
a smile on your face,
when were both
happily together.


Nothing can be done, no cure can be given
our paths have been shown
seprate we must go.

I still wish we could've, I still wish we can
be together as were months ago.
I just can't be together,
with a person I love,
with no love or effection comes back to me.


No girl will replace, what I once had with you
you were the special one, the one that I cared for.
The one that I wanted,the one I had dreamt of
it was only you Mariya
*tear* why had this hapepned.

Life will go on,
no other girl I will love, I swear to myself
and to my creator.
You're the last one for me, all the other's are nothing
compared to you.

You will go on with your life
you'll find another guy
your memorys of me will fade and finally vanish
you'll love that guy till death
you'll sleep in he's bed
you'll raise a family
and have everything you want.

All I wanted in my life
was your love.......​

 

you say you are trying to get the attention of a girl, are you even dating now? cuz this would be real weird if you weren't.

 

We know each other - we talk - but we are not dating yet

 

In that case, this letter is way too much. You need to just ask her out on a date. Maybe admit to having a bit of a crush on her, but you are going to scare her away with a letter like this...

 

I know you are a girl but how old are you ?

Well, I have a problem which is that i moved to another country now and can't meet her now

but this made me believe that i'm too much into her

I just miss her all the time

I wish i could be back there when i was in town

 

A few observations...

If it comes from your heart, you should not have to get a critique from an internet forum.

If you cannnot say those 3 words... I'm not sure this is going to work..

Let me ask this.. You can't say them, or you won't? There is a difference.

 

he's in a different country, and 24, and thinking of saying i love you to girl he has never dated.

 

I'm willing to say it but the problem is that i had 2 failed experiments and i don't want to keep screwing it up every time

Just want to say it when i'm sure it's the right person who deserve it this time

 

Getting down to the nitty gritty..

 

Ah, ok.. They've never gone out?

Sure, I can relate to that.. But you are gonna have tons of "failed experiments" thoughout your life, not just with love.. That's part of life.. Without the failures, you'll never succeed.

Right to the point man.. Gotta do it.

 

Guys please no scarasm here because i'm serious about this matter if you didn't notice

 

I don't need to meet you to understand from your posts that you are not someone a woman should be with. But hey, to each their own right? For the record, I could care less if you find me boring or how other men perceive me - I am in a perfectly happy relationship where I'm not afraid of the guy because he won't let me say "no."

Tech Entrance - if you are not dating this woman do not send her a sappy love letter. Ask her out! You may just scare her away if you are too over the top too soon.

 

My problem is that I'm too romantic - maybe one of those 70's style

I give too much but don't get that much back

I'm looking for that one who will give some back or i'll be always burning my fuel for no use