Time Management website review needed

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  1. #1
    hi friends

    i have started a PLR site called Time Management Website.

    I want yout guys and gals to review the text written in the PLR site and let me know if the site contents go well with the name of the domain.

    required honest reviews..

    bye

    nilesh
     
    nileshnirale, Jul 31, 2009 IP
  2. iimmaniac

    iimmaniac Member

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    I think the domain suggests something about the forbes famous peopel or personalities. And the main motive of your site is the time management. However, content is good.
     
    iimmaniac, Jul 31, 2009 IP
  3. nileshnirale

    nileshnirale Active Member

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    hi thanks for the review. I related time management with forbes famous people...
     
    nileshnirale, Jul 31, 2009 IP
  4. 334snd

    334snd Peon

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    #4
    change the photo in the header
    add some more better buy now (find images on the net) buttons in between
    GET your landing page made by a professional (most important)
     
    334snd, Jul 31, 2009 IP
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    skeyjez Member

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    the domain name is not great. I would want some key words closer to my niche. Savetime maketime getmoredone timesecretsoftherich moretimenoexcuses etc... also a comment on one part of your copy.
    Do you want to get rid of your dreadful "time-wasting" habits and start doing things in an organized, efficient manner?
    Are you tired of not reaching your potential? Is time slipping by day after day while you fall farther and farther from your life goals.

    Your copy needs to be about human emotions. Time-wasting is just a concept, speak to peoples pain.
     
    skeyjez, Jul 31, 2009 IP
  6. philipstorer

    philipstorer Peon

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    #6
    buy now call to action needs to be at the top of the page.
     
    philipstorer, Jul 31, 2009 IP
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    thestrangefruit Active Member

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    #7
    Nice landing page, but your domain does not match with the content. Like a above poster noted; write with more emotion. Humans understand when its crap and they're just being sold to.
     
    thestrangefruit, Jul 31, 2009 IP
  8. Brakesk8

    Brakesk8 Guest

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    It all looks great accept the domain needs a little work. You should try and fix it up a little.
     
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    #9
    Domain not matching with the contents
    but good effort
     
    sanqutbi1, Jul 31, 2009 IP
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    $14.95!. ?? :)

    nice Domain dude.....
     
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  11. nileshnirale

    nileshnirale Active Member

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    thanks a lot for reviews... i will try to change the images and content... do u think anyone will buy the book after reading the material on the website or the price of the book needs to be reduced..???
     
    nileshnirale, Aug 2, 2009 IP
  12. thematuna

    thematuna Banned

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    #12
    very nice landing page and other templates
     
    thematuna, Aug 3, 2009 IP
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    ahmad140385 Banned

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    #13
    PLR site very beautiful
    nice site friend i like your design
     
    ahmad140385, Aug 4, 2009 IP
  14. nileshnirale

    nileshnirale Active Member

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    i want to add some more information to the time management article..
     
    nileshnirale, Aug 5, 2009 IP
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    Site is good. I noticed that there is no CONTACT US option. You need to incorporate that part.
     
    qualityseotools, Sep 9, 2009 IP
  16. nileshnirale

    nileshnirale Active Member

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    will put the option contact us .... thanks for the reviews
     
    nileshnirale, Sep 10, 2009 IP