Throw few words about my blog...

Hi,

I have recently modified the theme so simple for my Make Money Online blog. Do you think it is ok?

 

Its very simple wordpress theme and its looking very straight target on the topic. I read the post its show interesting. which I mostly follow for my blog.

 

Nice blog, I really need some tips to make money online and your blog answers that.

 

if you wrote all the articles by your self with your experience its very good, let me tell you another thing , if you are really not a successful person of making money online, this topic is not very suitable for you. However you need to use a another theme for your site, don't use this wordpress default theme. it looks eeek ))

 

i checked out your site. It has great content and information. Keep up the good work.

 

Change the theme and add favicon.

 

Well, since I'm feeling a tad generous today, I'll give you a one-off review as far as I can.

1. Your title exceeds the suggested limit of 65 characters (including spaces). Try and cut them down and make it appealing.
2. Loads of dupe titles! Refer on this link. Wordpress platforms are easy to manage especially in terms of SEO. You're going to need the all-in-one SEO plug in to make things easier. Having repetitive titles across your website dilutes the relevancy of a page and ultimately, your homepage. Titles should be unique for each individual pages as well.
3. In terms of layout, I reckon that's a generic template from the gallery of Wordpress, right? Since you've used such, your blog now looks a bit dry. It lacks life and the enticement that people would be all the more interested in reading or clicking through the rest of your pages. Have some 'eye candy' that attracts people.
4. Your homepage is quite looooong. I somehow feel tired in scrolling all the way down just to see huge blocks of text! Maximise your space, not all people would scroll down especially if they lost interest head on. Try making it short and have your other articles as snippets with links such as 'read more' and stuff.

While I still have other things that I could point out, I feel that these are the ones that I deem most important.

Good luck with it!

 

Wow... What an analysis!!! With regard your first point, I would like to tell you that the title is just "MAKE MONEY ONLINE" (15 CHARACTERS). Please confirm how did you say that the character of title is more than 65 characters... Otherwise your review is top notch to modify my blog. Once again, thanks for your review!!!

 

Thanks. It's the best that I could find in your website. As for your title, this is what I see while looking on your source code.

<title>MAKE MONEY ONLINE | Experience the Internet Realms with Online Tips&#8230;</title>

Code (markup):

 

OKay!!! I understood. I will change the title somewhat smaller than now...

 

hmm its good, but i think u should change the template that will sounds good