This or That? Pick the better headline!

"Discover How An 20-Year-Old Punk Made Over $15,000 In Five Days With This Easy To Use Hidden Technique!"

OR

"Learn The Push-Button Method Used By An 20-Year-Old High School Dropout To Make $15,000 Under A Week!"


Which one would you click on?

 

The first one reads better. Although I would use Dropout instead of Punk. But that's just me.

 

the first one is more catchy on its title against the second..

 

Just split-test them, and then you'll know objectively, in the only way that matters, which is "better".

 

I like the first one. I try to avoid sayings like "push-button", "auto-pilot", or even something simple like "hands-off". Though these phrases are very common, there is still the chance that a reader will not fully understand the meaning. I try to write in very simple, clear English - simple enough that someone with only a basic reading level would be able to understand.

 

agree with the first one

 

Jump on this chance to learn the hidden technique used by a 20-year-old college dropout to make more than $15,000 in five days.

 

apologies for grammatical error. It should be A 20-year old and not AN

 

That'd work better, I agree. You can use Google Analytics for that.

 

first one is better

 

I'll also go for the first one...

 

I like the first one better as well.

 

The first one reads better but i agree you should replace punk with drop-out.

 

Neither. They are too cliche. Try a better, more original approach.

 

I preferred the first but I would test them both.

 

First one. Ditch "punk."

 

"Get The Secret to How I Made Over $15,000 In Five Days!"

I'm not sure the "high school drop" out approach is meaningful, but, as stated earlier, you should split test your headlines.

 

First one is better..

 

first one for me but I agree that you should remove or change the word punk, my first thought was it's a money making idea for punk rockers

 

I prefer the first one..... but, can you make it shorter?