The Trippiest 1 minute and 17 seconds of your life

Thanks for the feedback everyone.

I have redone my video and made it way shorter.

Please tell me if you like it, or why you don't like it.

http://www.trippytraffic.com/

Thanks.

 

People gave you feedback before? Where???

Saw your video. I clicked off after 5 seconds. You sounded and looked like a complete idiot.

Sorry.

Hey, you asked.

 

Ok, I saw where. lol Oh, man. I can't believe some people took you seriously.

 

Umm that's the whole point.

Did you wake up on the wrong side of the bed?

 

Must admit the video did lower the value.

Signed-up to your newsletter and read the guide - must say I thought it was great! Quick and easy to read - going to try the press release idea now

 

Ernster,

I love the design! Definitely a change from the boring and plain landing pages you see all the time. I think the wording should carry on with the "trippy" theme as shown in the video and not be so factual. Put in a few drug related jokes here and there to keep the reader entertained.

Just on the video... you've got the right idea but it wasn't executed that well. I recommend you re-shoot it and try to refrain from screaming -- the audio is VERY loud and does become distorted at times.

All the best,
Liam

 

Thanks very much Liam,

Not sure about the drug jokes...don't think that will go down well

Your not the first person to mention the sound problem. Perhaps it's not noticable with laptops..hmm.

I'll look into it

 

Drug related jokes don't keep me entertained. I would click out just as soon as I clicked in.

 

If you would click out from a drug joke wouldn't you also click out from the bad video?

 

Earnster:

I have to agree with Liam on all his points. Very creative, though. While things may have changed with the younger generations, "tripping" is pretty much a direct reference to using LSD, peyote, magic mushrooms, and the like.

On the video, lower the volume, and be a bit mellow. Think Tommy Chong but not as dumb. The color separation effect is good, but tracers would be even better.

Your text is good, but a little too serious. To keep with the theme, if blatant drug jokes aren't your bag, things like "the results will blow your mind" will fit.

Anyway, great idea and good luck!

 

I am sorry, but I would not sign up and use your services after watching your video... too childish for me.

 

wow the audio quality hurt my ears even with the volume at min

 

Yeah the volume needs sorting out.

That video is VERY annoying though dude! Like the different approach but it didn't work on me.

 

It's not bad, the only problem is something's wrong with your speakers and it makes a loud screetch noise.. Really annoying to listen to it.

Good approach though, and good luck.

 

BAH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA.......... That was, Ummm, Classic (In a sense that it targets young drug users that are either still in high school or still living at home with their parents.)

If this is the target you were aiming for, GOOD JOB, you hit the nail on the head. If not, Then, umm, you may want to rethink the campaign.

I wouldn't sign-up... To each our own though..

Good luck to you..

 

volume!!!!!

when you speak loud, your shtty mic distorts it x_X

laylout is nice
video is teh suck

 

I think that's all part of the trippy theme

Interesting way to get attention, but I don't think anyone would really take it seriously tbh.

 

Nah. But I was on my way to bed, though.

I thought that maybe you were just clowning around, but there are a lot of weird people out on the net, so....

I'm sorry, man, I'm as crazy and silly as the next guy, but that one....I don't know.

Anyway, good luck with it.

 

Ah ok thanks, and thanks everyone for the feedback.

Are you guys saying you dont like the "acksent" (or however u spell it)

I cant talk in my own voice because I stutter so to keep it flowing I use the acksent for my video and also to make it more fun.


What do you think?

 

I thought video was kind of stupid didnt keep me entertained and didnt sell the product at all. Another big downside was the distorted audio which made it hard to understand and very annoying to listen to. Better off taking that off and making some kind of effects on the front page that are trippy etc