The Perfect You e-book for sale , 75% commission .

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    http://thelifeofabundance.com/blog/?page_id=190

    I pretty much have zero skills for net programming or anything like that, my passion is writing and healing. But I know I need to be a good marketer to even to begin to reach people.

    Any tips? all and any feedback is welcomed. If anyone has moderately priced services I would also be interested.


    Thanks:)
     
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    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    You need major work on your sales page
     
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    first of all, lose that white background, quite frankly is annoying. That being said, include testimonial of people that have read your book, convince customers and affiliates that your book is the best one, without saying it of course. Remove those pics and replace them with screenshot of pages of your book that might be catchy.
    Have a nice day :):):)
     
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    Thanks, I figured that, but what should I do?


    I used a plugin called WP sales page.
     
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    A few suggestions -

    1. Model your sales page after OTHER sales pages. You need big, bold headings with text beneath them. The headings should be catchy and draw the reader in so he/she feels compelled to continue reading.

    For example, instead of "New e-book will show you SIMPLE and EFFECTIVE diet and nutrition methods that the mainstream can't stand." Try something like this:

    "I never knew it would be so darned easy to lose 60 pounds in less than a month!"

    Beneath that, you write: "I tried expensive mail-order diets until I went broke! I ordered 'Miracle Pills' on television that were nothing more than placebos. I even considered having a risky surgery! Then, I discovered a breakthrough, never-before-published weight-loss diet that allows me to eat DELICIOUS foods while LOSING weight!"

    Much more exciting! Don't write like a doctor or non-fiction reporter - write like Billy Mays!


    2. Invest in a set of professional graphics. A matching header, footer, logo, and book cover. You can hold a contest in the DigitalPoint contest forum and pick these up relatively inexpensively. Personally, I like cartoon mascots. They're great for branding a product. But you can go with whatever style works for you.

    3. Change your font. In real-life, I love fixed-width fonts. Courier New is my favorite. But fixed-width fonts not appealing to most people, as they make words seem old-fashioned and stiff. Go with Veranda, Arial, or Tahoma. Use a little bold face. Throw in a little underlining. And don't be afraid of color (especially red).

    4. You need to work on formatting. Be meticulous with your spacing. You affiliate link should be TINY and at the bottom. Most of your text should be centered. Graphics should be placed NEXT TO the text, when possible. Don't be afraid to use the "enter" key a little more often to create white space between sections of your pitch page.

    5. Don't use Wordpress. Download real Web Disign software andm ake a real, professional website. I use Web Page Maker. It's only 50 bucks and sooo easy to use. http://www.webpage-maker.com/

    I'm sure you have some great content in that eBook of yours, but you need to really SELL it like it's the most amazing thing to hit the Planet Earth since Pop-up Toasters!

    And, normally it's $19.95! And heck, isn't that such a small price to pay for the body of your dreams? BUT WAIT! This week we're having a sale! It's only $8.99! That's over half off!

    And I'll even throw in a FREE BONUS! A recipe book with 50 GOURMET LOSE-WEIGHT NOW meals! Losing weight never tasted so good! And it's yours FREE when you buy the eBook for $8.99!

    "The Perfect You Diet" has already helped thousands of people eat healthy, gain confidence, and lose weight. You WILL lose weight with "The Perfect You Diet" - I personally guarantee it! If you don't lose weight AND feel great about yourself, send me an e-mail and I'll immediately give you a full no-questions-asked refund! If you're not happy - I'm not happy! Give the "Perfect You Diet" a try today! You've got NOTHING to lose!
     
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    Wow ...Thanks so much I really appreciate the analysis.:):)
     
    Sutekhofnj, Aug 6, 2009 IP