Well I've reviewed a lot of sites in the past here at DP, so now it's my finally turn to be reviewed! My latest site is The Money Vault. It is a single page site to collect opt-ins for my mailing list which hands out freebies (free eBooks, guides etc.) and internet marketing tips. It is truly a valuable list but I don't know if I'm doing it justice with the site and the information that is currently on there (bullet points). Do you like the site's design? Do you think that there is enough information listed in the bullet points? Any other comments would also be appreciated. Cheers, Liam
Neat idea. I think you're overdoing it with the yellow though, but that's my opinion, of course. There's also not enough straight-up explanation. You might try a "What is this all about?" header and then a very quick and clear statement about what the site is for. I'd also stay away from the 'internet marketing' lingo. That turns the spam alert on for most folks. My 2 cents.
I like the idea, good luck. I like the design too, although all those graphics did take a few seconds to download. The contrast is also not high enough for the gold subtitle and text. And IMO, you're probably going to have to finesse and entice your visitors a little more to get them to submit their addresses.
I need more benefit, what can I get from this site before I sign in to this site... Focus on benefit, why I need to sign up, and how much this site will help me to do online business...give some testimonial... for the design, its good...good luck..
Hello Pony Nugget. I'll do my best in doing justice with my review of your site. It is good to know that there are more people out there who do their best in providing the best review they can for others. My Thoughts Email Opt-In Pop-Up Sorry... but thats annoying to me. I feel that it would be better to have this as part of your site and instead of me feeling like I am being forced into something I'm not sure if I want to be a part of. Template Your template breaks-up in my browser. Please have a look at the image below: For myself personally... I think it needs to be toned down... and made more professional... especially for the market you are after... hope that makes sense! Logo I'm thinking that you could have something different done to the logo. Its nice.... but something seems missing. Submit Form Didn't work in my browser. I tried it.... and nothing happened. Navigation Site is simple... but I think it could use a 'Contact Us' button... for anything unforseeable... site problems... link or banner purchases... or interested business partners... and so on! Conclusion Good site... and good ideas in what it is intended for. I do hope this helps. Respectfully. Lhlalyam
Thanks for the review. What browser are you using? I've heard of problems in Safari on Mac but not as bad as what you're seeing.
Thanks for that. It seems that the display issues are only occurring on Mac & Linux. I'm looking into a few solutions to get it displaying correctly. I've gotten rid of the popup and added a message of the bonus just below the input fields. I've also fixed the issue that some were having with submitting their details.