The Law of Attraction

Discussion in 'Websites' started by fireflyproject, Apr 5, 2007.

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    http://www.AttractingItAll.com

    Please review.

    The sales copy will be changed, this is just temporary until I can come up with something great. Also I have nothing to sell yet, so I'm not too concerned with bringing in money from this yet, just building a subscriber base that I can later sell my ebook to.
     
    fireflyproject, Apr 5, 2007 IP
  2. 8everything

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    I like the header design but I think the content area below looks a bit bland, What I would do is use a light grey background for the layout.
     
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    ludwig Notable Member

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    I like the header too :) simple and nice
    just one thing, there isn't much information on your site and I have too scroll scroll and scroll, I think for now you can break the text into parts
     
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  4. fireflyproject

    fireflyproject Active Member

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    Allright thanks guys. Sales copy isn't my strongest point, I've got a friend that will be helping me out with that part, and I think that the design needs a little work too, we'll see though. Anyone else?
     
    fireflyproject, Apr 6, 2007 IP
  5. the massgeights

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    i like the header design,but it doesnt flow.u have this bright green header,which goes straight next to a white background,which i think doesnt work.maybe a grey in the background (as 8everything said)
     
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    i can not say anything. it is one the bests i have ever seen here.very nice.
     
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    The header is fine, there's just a bit too much space down the sides.
     
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    I should increase the width of the main column by a few pixels (or %). The design is nice and simple.
     
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  9. fireflyproject

    fireflyproject Active Member

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    Allright. I added it to 60% and changed the sales copy. I'll be redoing the copy... again... this weekend after discussing it with some people. It's a LOT shorter and much more concise. I also have a friend coming up with another design for the site that I may switch to. I like the simplicity of this though, although it does need to be dialed in.
     
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    mmm.. maybe a green more dark..
     
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    fireflyproject Active Member

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    Scratch th current design completely. I had a friend that just sent me an amazing design in PSD, so I'll be redoing all of that. I'll repost under another thread once it's done later today. Thanks guys!
     
    fireflyproject, Apr 7, 2007 IP