I like the new hose end (the part smoking from). Make the hose itself a little thicker (just a little). Passit only through the one "O" to its left. and give it a better curve where it comes out of the hookah stem you changed the K. I liked it how it was much better.
Matt, I like the hookah in the second one in your last post. One small change: make the upper hand of the "K" a little shorter. Question: Is the "HOO" part of the word hookah the same font as the rest of it?
pehulz, i love your hookah and how you've separated parts of it. Lets do two things to your design: 1) find a better font for the rest of it (other than the "K" and hookah). 2) This one is gonna be tricky so bare with me: (its about the hose). I like how the hose is curving upwards right when it comes out of the hookah. Leave that as it is. The bottom part of the hose (the part below the "O"), instead of it curving down and pointing down, can you make it go to the right of the hookah and form a line below the "ah". So as if the end part of the hose is forming an underline under the "ah" with the tip of the hose pointing to the right (east). Thanks
Pehulz, getting better every time. I like it. One issue that I have with it right now is the height of the whole thing. Its too tall to fit in my header neatly. Lets do two things, make the hose go behind the hookah base instead of below it (that way we gain some height). Make the part of the stem that is right above the base a bit shorter. Thanks