Terrible performance of new landing page

Hi guys. Last weekend i wanted to give quick try to the computer niche. Since i am skilled with computers it was really easy for me to write 10 articles on saturday. They all came live yesterday and I have received 40 clicks from them so far . My articles have great CTR around 50%.
The problem is the CTR of my landing page. It is shockingly low. Out of the 40 visitors I had 1 clickthrough to product page of one of the registry cleaners My blogger landing pages with similar layout usually have a CTR of 30-50%!!!

I designed the page in 1 hour but i actually tested all the products and gave honest opinion and review of them. I am not saying it is great but it should definitely have better CTR than 1/40

Here is the landing page : http://repairyourregistry.blogspot.com/

Any ideas guys what could be causing it to have such a low CTR?

 

Perhaps you need to sell the idea of why customers need a registry cleaner. Put a small "pre-sell" at the top that explains out registry cleaners can speed up their computer, make a lot of errors go away, etc ...

Cheshire

 

Even though I already explain that in the articles i am going to add it to the page too. Will see if it has an effect. Thx for the tip

 

i think your reviews need to be broken up a bit ... the text all appears to run together, put like a blank line between each paragraph ... justify the text ...

also, the english isn't perfect ... it's pretty good, but there's some words that i think prevent the flow ... maybe just have a good review of it ... read it out loud to yourself and see how it flows ... you want their eyes to whizz over the words, not stop to figure out if the sentence makes sense

 

Your header graphic is kind of hard to read. And the review seems a bit spread out. Maybe compact it a bit so that more of it is above the fold.

Also did you know that your signature link is not working?

 

I think you need to choose other registry cleaners with multiple tools. People would like to have more value added service at the same price.

If you can give your visitors an honest review of the products and tell them the benefits by using your products. That would make sales easier.

 

Also, you could cloak your affiliate links and maybe link other related "blogs" you may have so it doesn't look like a 1-page site.

 

You should hide your affiliate links.

 

Try to have a call-to-action above the fold (at the time I'm writing this, your first link it just below).