Tell Me Where I'm Going Wrong Please!!!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Billy, Feb 23, 2006.

  1. #1
    I've just added companions retreat to my site the pet section, the last of the slide shows are going into place i'm getting a steady flow of visitor leaving virtual flowers teddy's and lighting candles and leaving poems.

    I feel my pricing is fair so am i just being impatience or what!!!

    http://www.liferecorded.co.uk

    http://www.liferecorded.com/browse_pets.php
     
    Billy, Feb 23, 2006 IP
  2. AWD1

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    You're probably not being that impatient, but your customers may well be.

    It took about 30 seconds for me to load that interactive map deal, and I'm on a cable modem. Most people won't wait that long.

    Not only that, it's not immediately clear what your site is all about. Maybe you should mention that in your opening paragraph somewhere, since it tends to get lost.

    It's a pretty cool idea, though.
     
    AWD1, Feb 23, 2006 IP
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    I really like the site. The interactive map loaded fine for me, but I'm on DSL.
     
    drhfinegifts, Feb 23, 2006 IP
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    You site has a good graphics but as AWD1 said your site loads slow. Why did you put your login part on the top? You should put something important on the top for your two visitors(bots and humans). Put your keyword in H1 tag on the top rather than the login (username:xxxx, password:xxxx)
     
    Basoone, Feb 23, 2006 IP