Teen Problems: Site review

http://www.dimensionet.com/teen

I do know there are not many articles but I would like a quick MOT from some people please.

 

well, you do really well at typing like a teenagers, ie errors all over the place

im wacko nice to met you.!!!

Erros are in bold, and my version of the info describing you is in brackets. (Well, you say you want to be honest!!)

You might want to place a porn warning!!! Do you really want to show kids pictures of a booner!!!!!! It'll give you past memories of your old booner username here!!!

LOL!!! I could make a duplicate web site with my version of your site!!!! Leave that topic to people who always know what there gender is!!! Not to mention the porn!!! Just tell them what a boner is. When they get it, they'll know!!!! All they need to do is ahem, think, and they'll get it!!!! If that doesn't work, there's always viagra!!!

 

My sisters work!. But the rest.. feck you made me laugh. Best laugh all day. About the spelling, I will fix (Well get my co-webby to fix) and the picture has been removed.

 

Color ! color!

You need color .. if i am 15, when Il see the first page, I'll turn away. Teenagers want something exciting, advanterous and fun. You can achieve it by color! color! color!

Of course, you can add it using picture!picture!picture!

 

Heh heh heh, and we all know what sorts of pictures will get a guy's attention when he's 15

 

He .. he .. and it would REALLY be a super-great teen site

 

It is very poorly written. I guess teens might not care, though.

 

Hey I could add Google Image Search Pictures, im sure I would get many more hits.. so im looking for pictures about teens
http://images.google.co.uk/images?q...-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-GB:official&sa=N&tab=wi

 

Do teenage girls talk like that?

Especially

It sounds like a guy (more specifically you) wrote it

 

Ummm, I would try this search instead

http://images.google.co.uk/images?q...-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-GB:official&sa=N&tab=wi

Keep safe mode on

 

For the sake I woman kind I hope not. No I tryied to see how my sister would work (I would of paid her for creating articles..) Yeah.. shes a tad of a slut aswell.

I think more highly of women, me writing that would of been offending.

I will get some images on the pages, and I will hire someone out (Yeap, Im always moaning about money but yet always spend it on pointless stuff) to check the spelling and grammer ect.

 

Lol..You really crack me up sometimes Soapbath

 

Gah! Thar iz thiz theng kalled spall chek. bast off al, it'z fre!!! Know ned 2 charg eny humen 2 dew dat!!

 

In ever post so far you have been sarcastic to me! DAM YOU! Don't make me pull the chocker. You won't be laughing then..

 

okay, the site is so and so the backgound is maybe a bit hard on a glimse, but overall a nice site...

 

I'm a little old pet dogie!!! What do you expect from us dogies!!!

pze no cry!!!!

*Is tempted to go through the site quoting my version of more content!!!*