Take A Look Here PLZ

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  1. #1
    Hi ,

    Take a look at this site PLZ Yo Fun Club

    What do u Think ?
     
    adrianzak, Jul 21, 2007 IP
  2. 8everything

    8everything Peon

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    #2
    For your header, I think it would look better if it was static (instead of having that animation there). You could use the same concepts (yellow font -> lighting bolt) but without the fading in and out.
     
    8everything, Jul 21, 2007 IP
  3. tarponkeith

    tarponkeith Well-Known Member

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    #3
    I'd invest the $5 for a header from the design forum...

    the other thing, is your ads push the main content so far down that i almost gave up scrolling for it...
     
    tarponkeith, Jul 22, 2007 IP
  4. klklinc

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    #4
    Nice touch with the Geovisite display. As others have pointed out you do need a better header. The one you have looks like an afterthought!!
     
    klklinc, Jul 22, 2007 IP
  5. BoutiqueMusic

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    #5
    I agree with the previous posts. I undestand that the games are free and someone has to pay but the ads are a bit much.

    Great site with free games and easy to read pages.
     
    BoutiqueMusic, Jul 22, 2007 IP
  6. _123_

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    #6
    I think you should make your header bigger, and it can also be improved.
    Make the ads smaller as I didn't really want to scroll down and find the games (many people won't want to do this either)
     
    _123_, Jul 22, 2007 IP
  7. adrianzak

    adrianzak Banned

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    #7
    mmmmm Nice !
    Good advices thank you all
    i will make some changes !

    Anything else ?

    Regards .
     
    adrianzak, Jul 22, 2007 IP
  8. xadrec

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    #8
    pretty cool...
     
    xadrec, Jul 23, 2007 IP
  9. adrianzak

    adrianzak Banned

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    #9
    Thanks a lot ! ..
     
    adrianzak, Jul 27, 2007 IP
  10. Slacker

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    #10
    Except the header, it does look pretty good. Good luck with it :)
     
    Slacker, Jul 27, 2007 IP
  11. mattjfrank

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    #11
    I'd loose the blinky ads at the top of the page.. also i think you have too many ads before content.. people dont' see anything but ads to start with they may not stay.
     
    mattjfrank, Jul 27, 2007 IP
  12. anthony8975

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    #12
    hurts to read.... too dark of background and font... it makes you have to focus on the text.... modify so you can glimpse at it and be able to read it
     
    anthony8975, Jul 28, 2007 IP
  13. Western

    Western Well-Known Member

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    #13
    don't use dark bg
    change banner
    remove ads
    atc
     
    Western, Jul 28, 2007 IP
  14. Sandi

    Sandi Well-Known Member

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    #14
    Dark background, change to light color.
     
    Sandi, Jul 28, 2007 IP
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    #15
    Hi,
    People have alreay pointed out most of the relevant points, however overall your getting there I'd like to see you be more adventurous with colour and tone, for me even if you changed to tone of grey might logically break up what seems like a BIG block of grey.

    Please be careful also "Increase traffic to your website. Get Google AdWords. " I'm worried you might be breaking your google T&C's with that line but I'm not sure

    regards
     
    Mozzer, Jul 29, 2007 IP
  16. workingeverymin

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    #16
    I agree with the previous posts little blan.
     
    workingeverymin, Aug 16, 2007 IP
  17. adrianzak

    adrianzak Banned

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    #17
    OK
    Thanks you all for your help
    I will Do some changes !
     
    adrianzak, Aug 20, 2007 IP
  18. n3o_the_on3

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    #18
    not very much wrong but still you can make it more gorgeous. just invest 20-30$ more . best regards
     
    n3o_the_on3, Aug 21, 2007 IP
  19. adrianzak

    adrianzak Banned

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    #19
    Ok i will see if i can have some $$ To invest in a new light template .
     
    adrianzak, Aug 21, 2007 IP
  20. dreams

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    #20
    nice site..
    change the sidebar and container background colour also...any dark colour as suitble for the dark grey
     
    dreams, Aug 21, 2007 IP