Thanks a ton for you input. You have some talent. The design isn't really what we are looking for. Refer to the examples I gave and see if you can do something with that style in mind.
here another one sir ......... What about my previous ones if u dont like it i can go for other....... pls feedback.........
whitcher dont really like the things on the sleves, and dont think blending is possible on a silkscreen. abuelintvn not really into them maybe if i think of some good color schemes. Ill be honest I really havent found anything like i thought i would. No one has blown me away.
I dont know if im a huge fan of that design, but through a couple more out there, thats the same kind of style almost!
Best one so far! You are getting what we are looking for. Try changing the big color to maybe good gray? I like the design style!