T-shirt contest design. 5 winners chosen, $20 each via paypal (total prize of $100)

my another entry

 

Again, sorry for the late reply guys.

EVERYONE TAKING PART IN THIS CONTEST OR ANYONE CONSIDERING THIS CONTEST PLEASE READ BELOW:
Here's where I am: it really annoys me to go over the intended 5 days (I didn't say the contest will end in 5 days but that I was planning to end it in 5 days) but unfortunately despite the entries I have received none of the new ones fully grabbed me. Some of them look good but I am still not fully convinced I should purchase them. Therefore I will give a few more clues and then regardless of what entries I receive, this Monday I will still choose and pay for 3 more designs. So if anyone is interested you still have this weekend to throw in some more entries. To help you along please choose one of the 3 slogans below to go on the t-shirt

1) Team P_roteinDirect.com.au

2) Authentic P_roteinDirect.com.au Sports Wear

or

3) Property of P_roteinDirect.com.au Lifting Dept.

You don't have to include my actual logo in the design and the style must be something sporty which young and old can wear (please don't come up with something ultra modern which an older person may not want to wear because it looks too modern)



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feedback for those entries I have not yet commented on:
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imdoggz #68: thanks again but this one looks a little hard to read and I also think the combination of 3 different fonts is not really working.

MantisArt #69: I would so love to choose one of your designs especially considering you've entered several of my contests and yet you never one. The first one looks ok and as mentioned above it is one of those I like but I am not fully sold on. It looks perhaps a touch too baseball style but it still looks ok. If I had to choose right now, yours would be one I would take. The one on the right also looks good and makes P_roteinDirect really stand out. So the verdict is they are both nearly there but not fully there.

redeemer #70: Looks good but I am not sure if it would work well as a t-shirt because the printing part may be too big

MiNdfr34k #72: so far I am still the only one who likes it. Everyone else doesn't seem to be convinced

blankeyecue #80: thanks for the new entry but doesn't do it for me. I don't really like the idea with the circle

incomebiz #82: thanks for the new one. Overall a very pleasant design but for some reason the P_roteinDirect part isn't working for me. I think it is either the background or the font that looks like comic style.

 

Hey bro what about my entry #76 top one was it passed as according to your feedback post #79...
Or i shall work on other..!!

 

thx for the feedback

my entry.

 

hpgraphic #76: sorry I missed that one. It looks ok, it is a pleasant design but not outstanding enough. I may still choose it if I don't get other better entries. I still have to choose 3 more winners.

incomebiz #85: the bottom one I don't like. It looks a little too busy. The top one looks ok but still not fully sold on it. Similar to what I said to hpgraphic above: "It looks ok, it is a pleasant design but not outstanding enough. I may still choose it if I don't get other better entries. I still have to choose 3 more winners."

3 more winners still to be chosen and that will happen no later than this Monday so if you're considering this get your entries in.

 

ok no prob thx for feedback.

 

Ok thanks for feedbacks...

here is another concept let me know....

 

hpgraphic #88: thanks for the new one. Please read the slogans above (my post #83) and you will see there is a mistake in your slogan. The word team should not be in it. But besides that I think it looks a little plain. I think the font you chose needs to be a bit more sporty somehow. I'm sorry if this contest is becoming a little frustrating but I can assure you it's also frustrating for me as well. I can see your and other designers hard work and I would rather end the contest right now and also save my time as well, but I will have to print these designs and in the end I must end up with something I like.

 

Heres my new one./... i need this badly^^ hope you like it

 

heres my last one^^ hope you like this^^

 

my entry.

 

Ok, one more try



-Will

 

Feedback because time is running out:

imdogg #90: thanks again. Looks a little hard to read so I would say no. #91 looks better but still not there. My suggestion is look at American college team styles and you will see that is a very nice sports style they use. It is very similar to baseball style. I appreciate your effort so far but none of them are in a winning position.

incomebiz #92; not bad but a little plain. Maybe all it needs is a little bit of "colour" or some extra circle or line to make it look not so plain.

willhaynes #93: thanks for the new one. Looks good and I think it has a strong chance. can you replace the P_roteindirect.co.uk part with Lifting Department or Lifting Dept and place .com.au in there somewhere

 

Hey bro proteindude so what about my design #76 you can select that according to your feedback ..
And we can work on that concept and make it done more better..
And meanwhile i will try to get another concept...
And i like designing so i wont frustrate till you satisfy..!!

 

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hpgraphic #76: thanks for the positive attitude. the one at #76 could work and maybe all you need to do is use some athletic style fonts (eg college sports style, baseball style)

incomebiz: I actually like #85 better than #97. I would just try a small alteration or something to #85 because it looks good. Also when i asked you to place it on a normal t-shirt earlier, I meant to place the design on a photo of a t-shirt and not on a drawn t-shirt. So you don't have to make the design appear real, just simply apply the flat design on a "real" t-shirt not on one that is drawn.

 

ok no prob proteindude.

but thx for feedback.

fix some small alteration for #85

 

Thanks proteindude will surely do the change and will submit you samples..