T-shirt contest design. 5 winners chosen, $20 each via paypal (total prize of $100)

ok here is other revision a cool and brandable look so what do you say now..
Colors can be changed..

 

Thx for The Feedback

im fix it now



thx.

 

Ow well, pitty the last one wasn't what you needed. Perhaps this will attract you more:

 

Here's my try
Please give feedback






Thanks
MiNdfr34k-

 

my another try...

 

One winner so far: incomebiz with the entry I asked you to apply on the "normal" t-shirt. Please pm me for paypal payment. I will send the payment tomorrow because right now it is very late at my end

everyone else: I apologise but I can only come back with feedback tomorrow as it is really late at my end. 4 more winners will be chosen in the next days.

 

Feedback please...

 

Thx for choose me.

I will apply on the normal t-shirt.

 

heres mine again nd again.. hope you will now like this..

 

My try:



Heres the edited sample:




Thanks!

 

Colours adjusted slightly, design on back changed.




Second version. Let me know what you think. Thanks!

 

Sorry for the late feedback but I am just having a very busy day.

incomebiz: I already sent through the payment

4 winners still to be chosen

hpgraphic #41: looks good. I am just not sure about the text under the PD part. It looks kind of busy. But the top part looks really good.

Kavalorn: thanks for the entries but none of them really stand out enough. The ones on the top line look a little plain. The bottom left corner one looks ok but the one next to it has the wrong font. It looks to me like a western movie style font.

MiNdfr34k: thanks for the entries. I only like the top two. It is an interesting and different colour combination. I like the second one from the top the best but somehow the text under team PD seems to be a little too wide and not sure if all could fit on a t-shirt

masjacky: good to see you again and thanks for entering this contest. I am sorry to say but I don't like any of them. They don't seem to go well on a t-shirt.

karimc48: please read my post #21. I don't want slogans to advertise my business in the open but in a "subtle" way.

imdoggz: #49 Interesting concept but not suitable. I don't sell anything jeans related but sports related.

blankeyecue: thanks for entering. Very, very strong entry. Let me be picky but I think P_roteindirect looks a little too spread out and it needs to be somehow slightly compacted (narrowed), perhaps by decreasing the size of the entire design. Also, would it look ok if you attached .com.au just under P_roteindirect and then perhaps remove the bottomline (P_roteindirect.com.au) alltogether?

gsmile: #51 Thanks again but somehow they don't seem to go well together. Everything looks a little unbalanced.

 

I think this would be my last try hoping this would be accepted^^ more power to you guys^^

 

Thx For The Payment.

Design Send Via Pm.

 

can't say that I'm having much luck with these so far.

Here's another quick entry though



-Will

 

another design





Thx.

 

Here's my try:


by ArtkasDesign
www.artkasdesign.com/portfolio

 

Another one

 

Thanks for feedback

here is the revision