SweetPoems.net - please review

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Matt18, Jan 2, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi

    could you please give me some feedback on my new site: http://www.sweetpoems.net/

    Only 4 poems at the moment, but I will add them every day.... :)

    thank you for your time
     
    Matt18, Jan 2, 2010 IP
  2. irdogg

    irdogg Well-Known Member

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    #2
    i really like that header
     
    irdogg, Jan 2, 2010 IP
  3. lhotpfan

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    #3
    the site looks so cute great job!
     
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    addaminsane Well-Known Member

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    #4
    loads kind of slow for such a simple setup. I'd make a better header with the text as part of the image or get rid of the top background if the seo is important.
     
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    #5
    It does load a little slow, be weary of that as Google is talking about ranking based also on load times.

    Everything aside, it looks great, the header is cute as, but made my eyes hurt a little. Too many coloes can be a bad thing, the human eye loves all things neutral!

    All things aside, it looks like you have done some really good keyword research there, just be aware using a WordPress blog that this needs to be consistent as you add more content, on that main page, you want the focus to me on your main keyword (Which I assume is Sweet Poems).

    Nice work, only suggestion I can think of would be to dull down the theme a little more. Add some warmth to it, and add some of your character to the site. If you dont do that, who is going to come back to your site? :)
     
    redthehat, Jan 2, 2010 IP
  6. Johnson Kee

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    Pretty unique design. The orange heading sort of clashes with the background at places, especially at the end of "poems" and the word "on". Overall quite nice.
     
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    #7
    nice site :D
     
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  8. Matt18

    Matt18 Guest

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    Thank you all!

    Will try to do my best in editing the design :)
     
    Matt18, Jan 3, 2010 IP