Suggestions / Critics are Welcomed

Discussion in 'Websites' started by nks, Mar 17, 2010.

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    Hey, I have just developed a new website targetting at beauty. Please kindly review the site, and give your critics.

    Here it is: Dolly Boulevard
     
    nks, Mar 17, 2010 IP
  2. Hugh H

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    #2
    Hi nks,

    Great site :)

    I reckon you could do with a better background/template though!
     
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    #3
    I think it looks nice.
     
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    #4
    very nice layout, little bit cluttered
     
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    nks Well-Known Member

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    Got it! I'll work on the background template... hearing this, yes, it certainly can be improved with a proper background.

    Hmm... a little cluttered? Can you please help to define, what is being cluttered here. Any way to improve?
     
    nks, Mar 18, 2010 IP
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    I feel that the adverts on the right are too large and take up too much of the screen. It would be enough to make me want to visit somewhere else instead. Good content though, good luck with it
     
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    nks Well-Known Member

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    Hi WriteYourContent,

    Thank you for your invaluable critics. Just a question, what ad size would you suggest (in place of the ads on the right side)? I appreciate your honesty :)
     
    nks, Mar 20, 2010 IP
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    #8
    very nice :)
     
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    Background is too blend..
     
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    #10
    Your didn't choose the best WP templates -- this one looks rather plain. Beauty/cosmetic sites should have a look that appeals to women.
     
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    nks Well-Known Member

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    I agree, in fact I am looking into re-designing the background with enhanced colouring.

    I know this looks plain - it is meant to be this way; simple look. Too complicated look may deter readers. However, you did bring up a pretty strong point. I should design it towards something that appeals to women. I'm looking into it. Thanks!
     
    nks, Mar 21, 2010 IP
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    #12
    chose a good template
     
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    A very minimalist design and everything suits the mood of "Beauty". I like it very much. Do keep up with your updates.
     
    Zepxs, Mar 21, 2010 IP
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    Thank you very much for your support, Zepxs. We have posts coming in regularly everyday. Hopefully you can also lend a support if you find it interesting and useful.
     
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    By cluttered, too much on the page close together, not enough white spaces, to naturally lead a person to a particular section.
     
    SimonV, Apr 5, 2010 IP
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    Hi SimonV, I'm not sure if I understood you completely. Do you have a reference site where it is considered less cluttered on the page? I appreciated :)
     
    nks, Apr 5, 2010 IP