Suggest seo friendly changes for newly added pages in site.

Hi, all
I have recently added following two pages in my site's index page.
I'm doing all type of link building for them but couldn't got any positive changes in search engines.
pls suggest mi there is given title and descriptions are proper and search engine friendly or not?
waiting for kind reply from all webmasters.

http://www.autodriver.com/car-loan-bad-credit.html
http://www.autodriver.com/no-credit-car-loans.html

 

I would suggest you to concentrate on Title tag of the page, Meta tags, keyword tag (define few keywords in it not too many), care full about Important HTML tags and Links & Image. And one more thing your links are not opening. so i cannot give u advice on it. But try to keep in mind the keyword density. try to keep the description round about 375 char.

 

Try to restructure your URL's according to your keywords that help you to get better result i think you need to pay little attention more to your given url's