Stylized Vectored Water Wheel Type Mill 24 hrs or less

Hard to describe, but we need a vectored flour mill with a waterwheel.

It needs to be classy and stylized like a simple abstract outline or silhouette. Almost a mark like symbol.

Here you see a mill (tall building with waterwheel in front) See image labeled http://www.woodtechgifts.com/ That building is a bit more rustic than what we want. It needs to be clean and modern. Here is an image of something almost right.....
It's small but well labeled.

Color does not matter just show it black on white for now. I need a vector ai. No psds....



This will be part of a bakery logo so I must have all rights to the design.


First one to nail it wins $15 Pay pal. $5 bonus if we find one we like within 12 hours. I will be online and here for feedback very late tonight and early tomorrow.....

 

Here's an idea
An abstract of a flour mill with waterwheel



Feedback appreciated​

 

Feedback Appreciated.

 

both are close....

proficient: yours is a bit too squared off....I like the abstract shape of the cinnamon roll. You may want to try to improve the wheel though.
Scorpion:again very close but I want a little more abstract and flowing rather than stiff curves. waterwheel looks great, the big circle is a no go. make it more like the abstract cinnamon roll proficient showed

 

goldleaf: nice nice nice....maybe a little too squared off still , maybe remove the line at the bottom and move the wheel into the front and I like the swirl in back but it needs to say cinnamon roll to me, nothing about this says bakery. try to incorporate a little more of a cookie, cinnamon roll, danish, no bread loaves....

I want simple clean lines, not alot of detailing and able to stand on its own in one solid color.....

 

Revised Feedback Appreciated.

 

goldleaf, way too messy...

proficient: almost there, soften up the wheel its starting to look like a gear....

 

Revised, Softened. Feedback Appreciated

 

my entry

 

chewsysmom: nice but kinda cartoony, need it classy and stylish...

 

proficient is closest except for the water wheel, try to redo that. it does not look like a water wheel at all.....

its so close.....

 

goldleaf, no sorry they are getting worse....

 

thanks for feedback

another try:

 

mmm better, need the cinnamon roll back and if you can make the building more rounded and less sharp...you might have it there.

 

cinnamon roll more in back and corners softened as much as possible. color is softer as well.

 

Revised - 2 Versions.

 

guys you are so close and I know this is frustrating. Take a look at this,, clean lines, nothing sharp, very classy, please try to get it today, I really need to finish this one up. Thanks....