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here is my try

 

good designer very nice approach! Too many components but nice. Here what u should change. Reduce amount of colors. The pink with green looks good, so get rid of red and yellow. The hand should be woman's not man's. Ask for membership is no important message make is bellow the card and smaller, or you can all together remove it and keep only "Become member at www.TzaTza.com" . You can keep the logo, but make red in the colors of the card you can also get rid of it altogether. I'm waiting for new entry.

 

revized version

 

Revision:

 

vB will probably kill the quality, so direct link is here: http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/8412/tzatza.png

I know it's very basic but I thought about it and tried to take into account what you said about others... my theory is, TzaTza stands out the most (well, joint with the card graphic), so TzaTza members will know straight away what it is (and assume they can save at x shop). I drew attention to various other keywords in the design. The web address is smaller at the bottom because if people are going to take the time to read it, they will read the smaller text, right?

Feedback please.

 

good designer it's getting better. Take the entry without shopping cart and remove the hand, make red part of the logo dark purple from the card. Make logo a bit smaller. Make save here sign with white background and black lettering, or something along these lines. You are getting into finals.
EmG, I do like it! You are getting into finals. Here are the changes I would like to see: Move card with armament behind it under "save here". The "ask for... " text change to: Become member at www.TzaTza.com (the website on the new line). The logo make height of the two lines.
Chris.Bthanks for entry. It's nice but too high-tech and too dark for woman shoppers.

 

I PMed you!

 

Revised:

 

That any better? Or should I leave it for this one?

 

My girlfriend did this one

 

working on my redo entry now.

 

24 hours has passed. And there are two stickers I like and both of them need some improvement.
The winner is EmG's and his last design got 1st place - CONGRATULATIONS! You will get $15 as soon as you fix couple minor things. Please PM me your ICQ or Skype info as well as PayPal Info.
I did not plan any 2nd places, but I do like design by Chris.B with white background. There is only one problem with it. The first word should be Savvy not TzaTza. Please change it and prepare the source file as well as PayPal Info. I will send you $5 2nd prize that I came up with just looking at your great work.

Thank you everyone for your participation. ​

There where at least 5 good designs. Soon I will have contest for 1-page tri-fold brochure design. And I hope to see you all participating.

 

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