I made my fourth lens on Squidoo, it's improving but... Any ideas? Here is the lens: http://www.squidoo.com/DoNotLoseWeightFastIsTheBestWay
I have a few: First, use a Table of Contents module when you have a lens with that many modules in it. It helps visitors find what they are looking for quickly. Second, rename all of the modules you use. "New Video" doesn't tell me what the video is about. Don't call the table of contents the table of contents, either. Third, give it a more personal touch. Part of the charm of Squidoo is the sense that the people behind the lenses are real, genuine folks who happen to be experts on a certain topic. So, let the information flow in a conversational way, infusing multimedia components where they are most likely to be relevant, not just string them together after all the text. I hope you understand my meaning and that you find it helpful,