Spring Promo Graphic

Discussion in 'Photoshop' started by 8everything, Mar 3, 2007.

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    I've started using photoshop recently (since I want to build my graphics design portfolio and start a graphics media business soon offering my services :)). I was just wondering if you guys can give me feedback on this graphic. It's just a graphic that's suppose to be "spring-ish"

    Thanks :)

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    8everything, Mar 3, 2007 IP
  2. unitedrokz

    unitedrokz Peon

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    #2
    sure if its Spring in Emo-Land :p *joke*

    but seriously its really good...not too sure about the diagonal lines in the background though - it looks like you have put a slight blur on them and IMO its taking away the nice sharpness of the image.

    still nice though
     
    unitedrokz, Mar 3, 2007 IP
  3. ptb-cheng

    ptb-cheng Member

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    #3
    Seems to me, too many elements on the top half, I like the bottom half pattern a lot.

    Nice try!
     
    ptb-cheng, Mar 3, 2007 IP
  4. 8everything

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    Very true, the graphic does look a little bit too busy... I should try to balance things more next time :)
     
    8everything, Mar 3, 2007 IP
  5. Nosliw

    Nosliw Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Agree with someone saying the pattern was blurry, make it "not blurry" and it will look better :)
    + instead of a yellow outer glow, try black, with 30% opacity!
     
    Nosliw, Mar 3, 2007 IP