Spelling check-up, personal website

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Sphinx, Aug 28, 2006.

  1. #1
    As english isn't my native language, some minor (or major?) grammatical flaws may have found their way into my personal website.
    Therefor, I would really appreciate any feedback regarding misspellings, grammatical errors and such things. Please PM or e-mail me any suggestions.

    Here goes the URL:
    http://www.robert.nu

    Thanks in advance!
     
    Sphinx, Aug 28, 2006 IP
  2. Crouton

    Crouton Guest

    Messages:
    44
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #2
    "I prefer not to call myself by a formal title. But for those who insist; call me an information designer. It doesn't say much about my profession, and that's the way I want it. Have a glance at the 'Projects' and 'Curriculum vitae' sections instead. That would probably tell you more."

    into:

    "I prefer not use a formal title. But, for those who insist, call me: an information designer. It's vague; I like it. Why don't you have a gander at the 'Projects' and 'Curriculum vitae' sections, instead."

    Shorter. Snazzier.
     
    Crouton, Aug 30, 2006 IP
  3. Sphinx

    Sphinx Member

    Messages:
    41
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    43
    #3
    Thanks alot. The texts is now changed.
     
    Sphinx, Sep 3, 2006 IP
  4. andgu

    andgu Guest

    Messages:
    47
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #4
    Hej

    I've used www spellchecker.net/spellcheck/ to iron out at least the worst spelling and grammar errors, just thought I share the link.
     
    andgu, Sep 4, 2006 IP
  5. Daniel591992

    Daniel591992 Well-Known Member

    Messages:
    594
    Likes Received:
    19
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    125
    #5
    "Resume for Robert Carlesten, born february 3, 1978"

    should be

    "...born on February..."
     
    Daniel591992, Sep 4, 2006 IP