Hey folks, I hope you`re doing awesome! I`m about launching my WSO (warrior special offer) in few days and I want you guys check my sales letter. I`m hungarian so there is probably some grammar and spelling errors... would you check it out and let me know if you see any problems please. All I want to know is: is it fits to the english grammar and spelling requirements or not... Thanks very much!
I'll let somebody else check the grammar, but if I were you I'd remove that ugly face with the middle finger. Here, in the US, for instance, hardly anyone uses that gesture anymore (unless it's a case of road rage or maybe among some teens / young adults who want to look bad). I lived in Europe and Eastern Europe before, I know how common it is over there to give the middle finger for no apparent reason. I don't know how common it is in the UK. So, if I were you, I'd probably get rid of it, since it's a sign of bad taste and replace it with something more appropriate for a wider audience.
I agree In Canada the middle finger is Unacceptable It is a form of swearing and disrespect. I personsall feel any one useing this jesture is immature and I avoid them like the plague . If I receive any thing like that on my email I will block it and report it as phishing spam
As a native English speaker, the following makes more sense: Fixed the grammar errors and spelling mistake in the following: I would also definitely remove the face with the erect finger, it's pretty offensive, the rest looks ok though.
Thanks for your opinion! Well... ist not a harsh thing at all. Don`t get me wrong I know where you comming from! But the thing is I don`t want to follow the good old was for advertising. I want to come up with something new if its a middle finger... lets see how it works. I just try to think outside of the box. All my friends thinks its looks funny, and they think people will like it. I don`t know I give it a go! Thanks malky66!!! Really appreciate it. Well all of you just said the pic is offensive... Its interesting... I personaly think its funny... So you recon people will take offense?
The entire piece looks like it was written by a teenager. I would not take it seriously and move on if I read it. The money people (target/market) are not in that age group(teenagers). It simply doesn't work from an advertising perspective.