These are some of my poems .. Whats your opinion? Shall i try my hand on songs??? Da Distance The Sleepless nights Im having are always spent in thinking whether or not you think the same about me and by closing my eyes I can see you right infront of my and when i open my eyes you are gone and only your thought remains I wish we could break this barrier and remain together forever Wishes do not always come true but this wish will;if u wanted to Your thoughts always manifest themselves sometimes as my tears,sometimes as my blood You have shaken me to the core and only you can make me what i was before Cant sleep! the precious thoughts you have given me i always relish them and smile i live those thoughts everyday and continue to smile in disbelief and disappointment your memories bring tears down along with the smile how i wish you were still mine the words that dropped from your mouth were like the petals falling from a flower i can still remember them well and continue to smile in disbelief and disappointment Your thoughts have disorganised my mind as such cant think of anything else even today.its one year after i lost you still cant get any sleep .no way thinking again of your precious thoughts and continue to smile in disbelief and disappointment Longing for u My heart longs for you My soul thirsts for you Like a plant in wait for rain Like a heart filled with pain You bring light in to my life Like the sun at dawn Every second without you , my life fills with darkness Like the sun at dusk My life is like a desert And you are the solitary rose Who has turned this desert In to a garden and in it your love flows Every day you don’t talk to me My eyes are opened through out the night Everyday I talk to you In my dreams appears only your sight I hope I never lose you Without you I don’t know what I’ll do Because we are one not two And ill always love you Come back Baby All day and night long its you who Im missing Im trying to understand its meaning I see you when im on the road riding I see you when im sleeping I see you when im studying I see you when im thinking You have invaded my thoughts and soul Without you baby, I cant be whole You are like a diamond in a mine of coal Without you Baby,my life is just an empty hole I cant wait till you come back here all the barriers, we can clear Fate has brought about my worst fear and i felt what it is like being away from you my dear If you cant be in my life anymore Atleast after death, we can be together im sure Not just heart and soul,you are my core Without you Baby ,my life isnt the same anymore
I can write lyrics if i have a tune.. So thinking of trying my hand at song writing..!Need opinion from you guys