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Discussion in 'Websites' started by allbest, May 6, 2019.

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    Hello all,
    I began to write a blog https://nowtravelwithus.blogspot.com/
    I just hope to improve my English with this way. It is a great practice, I think. On the other hand, I'd like to ask your opinions also. I know there're some problems on my grammer and what about the other things in the blog?
    Thank you..
    SEMrush
     
    allbest, May 6, 2019 IP
    SEMrush
  2. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    It looks pretty good and people will be patient with your writing because they'll know it's not your first language - if anything the errors make it more authentic.

    I took a look at https://nowtravelwithus.blogspot.com/2019/05/transportation-options-in-turkey.html

    Change the first image to something that is realistic rather than aspirational.
    The comment form at the bottom of the page is out of place, check your theme.
    upload_2019-5-7_12-14-39.png
    "So all kinds of transportation cannot be efficiency for every single city"
    I wouldn't even bother saying that, it's to be expected in any country but if you do, then change efficiency to efficient. If you wouldn't say it in Turkish, then don't say it in English either.
    Change "airway, seaway, railway, roadway" to "air, sea, rail, and road"
     
    sarahk, May 6, 2019 IP
  3. allbest

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    Hello,
    Thank you very much.
    i) I'll interest with that Contact Form, I agree with it, and thank you.
    ii) I changed it to "efficient" and also delete "ways".

    Just a question: What is the difference between airway and airline? We prefer mostly "airline", but in some sources, people prefer to use "airway". Is it something about UK and US English?

    Thank you and have a good day...
     
    allbest, May 6, 2019 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    I use UK english and I've never seen the word "airway" before - I assumed it meant "route" which might be serviced by any number of airlines.
     
    sarahk, May 6, 2019 IP
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    Thank you very much Sarah..
     
    allbest, May 7, 2019 IP
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    Hmmm. The first sentence "If you think to visit Turkey"
    It's better to say "If you are thinking of visiting", isn't it?
     
    DirkMarden, May 14, 2019 IP
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    That's right, thank you very much... I changed it.. :)
     
    allbest, May 14, 2019 IP
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    If you don't feel confident in your English, you can use some programs.

    If you are thinking of visiting Turkey, we'd like to assist your travel plan. Feel free to contact us. You'll find useful information, suggestions, and tips for your holiday.

    1) You don't need with
    2) information
    3) comma after and
     
    RobertRay, Jun 3, 2019 IP