Solo Ad Services - Review Please

Discussion in 'Design' started by Les Blythe, Nov 5, 2012.

  1. #1
    I would be grateful for reviews of my Solo Ad page, here:
    http://nowover2u.com/sas
    Particularly with respect to if it's easily understood, easy to navigate and would make you want to order.
    Many thanks in advance
     
    Les Blythe, Nov 5, 2012 IP
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    banzaj Peon

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    Is it easy to understand? Not really. And it's even harder because you have to scroll all the way down to find out what is the product about. I think it's not the best idea to put testimonials above the description.

    Easy to navigate? Yes.

    Would I order? I don't think so. I think you need to come up with a new catchy heading phrase and easier to understand description. Also, in my opinion, list of benefits is too long. As a user I would prefer short and straight to the point sentences.

    That's just my 2 cents. Keep up the good work and good luck!
     
    banzaj, Nov 7, 2012 IP
  3. Les Blythe

    Les Blythe Greenhorn

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    Thanks so much for taking the time to review - much appreciated.

    Just to mention - the page is not one that is designed to be found randomly through Google but customers who get to it know that they are looking at solo ads. With solos - reputation and social proof is critical - hence the testimonials at the top.

    So it's only a sales page in the sense that visitors need to be re-assured of reputation and reminded of the benefits of solos.

    I do take your comments on board - so thanks once again.

    Les
     
    Les Blythe, Nov 7, 2012 IP
  4. VOnline

    VOnline Member

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    Your Paypal button should be higher-res, looks very cheap/spammy.

    Also, the orange text above Paypal looks weird italicized.
    Should look into a new web design/logo design. That will give you more credibility and interest for your readers.
     
    VOnline, Nov 7, 2012 IP
  5. Les Blythe

    Les Blythe Greenhorn

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    Thanks again for taking the time guys - have noted the points raised and made some changes.
    Cheers
     
    Les Blythe, Nov 8, 2012 IP