Skateboard Video

Discussion in 'Sports' started by Skates & Ladders, Nov 6, 2013.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I run a skateboard school and have created new video which I will be using as part of an upcoming advertising campaign. Would appreciate constructive feedback on whether the messaging is clear.



    Thanks
     
    Skates & Ladders, Nov 6, 2013 IP
  2. undergroundseo

    undergroundseo Active Member

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    Awesome Job! I think the video came out really good, only thing I would suggest is turning the music volume down at times and your voice up when giving some instruction. Just have a few parts where you can hear yourself explaining a few tips to the client. At the end of the video have the girl who was being taught mention a few proactive words then it will be gold ;)
     
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  3. Skates & Ladders

    Skates & Ladders Greenhorn

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    Thanks for the feedback and suggestions, much appreciated.
     
    Skates & Ladders, Nov 6, 2013 IP