Site SEO review

I started a new thread about this (I already started a thread about these sites but then in a design perspective), could someone with SEO knowledge please review my sites ?

Show IP Address
Main keyword: ip address
9th on MSN with 'ip address'
4th on Yahoo with 'show ip'
36th on Yahoo with 'ip address'

DLL download
main keyword: dll
11th on MSN with 'dll'
75th on Google with 'dll'

Well, I want to be in the top 10 with these keywords at Yahoo, MSN and Google Is my site good optimized now for these keywords, is the density good ?

Thanks in advance!

 

non one who can give me feedback about this ?

 

i guess it would help if we knew what you are trying to seo for? i'm not sure what you're aiming for, but right off the bat it looks like you don't have alt tags on your header. not a very big deal, but usually that's where i can quickly find what terms ppl are optimizing for..

 

kkibak, i'm optimizing for IP address on showipaddress.com and dll on dll-download.net

 

I made some changes to ShowIPAddress.com (added a sentence at the top, which changes at every page). Will this help me ?

 

Btw, I'm now 7th at MSN with the keyword 'ip address' Hope to get in the first three.

 

Only looked for a second but you are only using one < b > and one < h1 > with your keyword. You add a few more instances. Don't overdue it of course.