As you may already know, I have SERVICE called "Traffic-Sales-Profit". It's NOT a theory-filled e-Book, it's NOT a nifty little Software and it's NOT even a funky new Script. It's a brand new, full-fledged SERVICE that involves raw 'man-power'. "What's in it for YOU?" Well... this could be exactly what you were frantically searching for and needed very badly. And, I promise: You WILL learn at least a few things (at no cost) just by visiting my new site, that you can implement in your online business TODAY! Go to: http://traffic-sales-profit.com * If you own one or more websites... this is for you * If you do not have a lot of time to promote your websites... you will need this * If you want all the Traffic, Sales & Profits you REALLY deserve... you will love this You may have purchased tons of other 'Products' but I am 100% sure that you have never seen anything like this 'SERVICE' before. So, don't delay... Go there RIGHT NOW! http://Traffic-Sales-Profit.com ... save 309 hours of WORK and wads of money. P.S. "Hire a "trained" assistant who can do all the "dirty" tasks, multiply your identity all over the Internet AND work on your behalf to bring you Credibility, Traffic, Sales and Profits" http://Traffic-Sales-Profit.com All the best, Raam Anand
You have less than 5,000 daily visitors, and your homepage turns off most visitors. ... For one thing, it is toooooooooooooo loooooooooooooong. That long-ass page by itself told me plenty. All due respect, you need more work. But maybe your service is good for the ones who are starting out.
Can you really drive traffic to me? I only need 4-6 customers a year. Either Copper or Slate only. And Only local.
I scanned your whole page and you didn't even tell me what your trying to sell me. You say it's a service but what kinda service, cause technically Monica Lewinsky performed a service and if thats what your selling I don't want it, you just need to tell us what it is.
Obviously when you scan a page you seem to be scanning very quickly and missing important stuff because even the post tells you what it is. You hire one of our assistants to perform the tasks listed on the page at http://traffic-sales-profit.com
Your copywritten page needs a lot of work. Way too long, too much irrelevant text, no link to your "free report" anywhere until the bottom...
I don't think his page is too long. I've seen a longer one actually. I'm impressed on what you are offering Raam because I actually read your sales letter word by word and not just scan it.
Oh by the way. I can't believe Luke Parker has given his testimonial for your product. If Luke says it is worth his money, I believe him.
For those of you who don't like reading look at the attachment and that's what my company will do for you to drive traffic to your site. But for a more detailed explanation of the services my company will do for you I suggest you read the sales letter at: http://traffic-sales-profit.com
People have been asking me to make it short on what I offer, so here it is. You would be hiring a virtual assistant that has been trained to drive traffic to your site. Here's what a Virtual Business Builder Team can do for you: #1. A Team of executives who will work tirelessly on YOUR website to attract TRAFFIC (visitors). #2. A trained team of professionals who know how to implement all the 15 'Strategies' at http://Traffic-Sales-Profit.com to drive REAL visitors to YOUR website (look at the 2 attachment for what the 15 strategies are) #3. A detailed report upon completion of all the 'Tasks' #4. A full list of all the URLs, Websites, Blogs, Article Directories etc. where YOUR website is promoted (for verification) That's NOT all... - YOU don't have the hassles of "Employment" - All you need to do is signup to this special limited offer and fill up a form with details of YOUR website (or email us your website info) Thanks, Raam
It looks like you're charging $1500 for the work. Do you charge on a monthly basis, even though the work you do can be completed in less than 3 months? Can you provide references of sites that you have worked with in the past?
$1500, is that reasonable. Just new to the whole IM thing, picked up some great info on this forum and am in the process of implementing. Haven't seen the full sales pitch, however the typical articles, blogging, seo and adwords route doesn't seem to be worth $1500. Would like to see the results of this so called "service."
seriously, your page is really long. perhaps try to summaries all of it and let users know what they are in for instead of give ALL of it at once?