Contest Simple Landing Page - $35 - logo included for colors - only email signup form

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by blanktorp, Dec 26, 2010.

  1. #1
    I am looking for a very simple landing page - it will basically be a "under construction" page substitute/alternative.

    Just one page for full screen - I am just looking for the PSD design here.

    See attached logo here for colors, and include of course the logo as well on the page.

    limitedgourmetlogo.jpg

    The background can be just colors or it can be an image or set of images - what we will sell on this website is dry food like pasta, sauces, spices, jam/preserves, olive oil, etc etc

    Please make the website look elegant but modern of course as well. It will be something that attracts stay-at-home moms and wives. Nice and fun but comfortable, warm look.

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    On this landing page, I just need a nice background, and then just a text box for EMAIL ADDRESS entry - they will be signing up for an email list. Have a button that says "Submit" next to it.

    Include somewhere around the box on the page the text:

    "Receive limited-time offers and deals on Gourmet & Specialty Food"

    "Sign up to be notified when we launch and our first product is featured"
     
    blanktorp, Dec 26, 2010 IP
  2. divide0

    divide0 Peon

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    This is my entry..any change is can be made
    Hope you like it
    landing page1.jpg
     
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  3. sinuville

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    Last edited: Dec 26, 2010
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  4. blanktorp

    blanktorp Active Member

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    #4
    Thank you both.

    divide0 - this is a good start. All the colors work together with the logo. I like it in general, but please change around the text a bit. (1) the "enter email address" should be smaller and not italicized; (2) the "sign up..." should be larger and match other colors better; (3) the "receive limited..." is the main text of the page so it should be larger -- maybe on all you can also try some other fonts

    sinuville - thanks, but these are not very much what I would be looking for. they don't go with the style of the logo. There is too much going on, with the sudden blue color font, some three women in the background, the striped box, etc - too modern and aggressive and too web 2.0 for my style.
     
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  5. divide0

    divide0 Peon

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    #5
    Thank you for the feedback Sir.
    Here is the revision..hope you like it
    I can coding it too Sir :)
    landing page_LimitedGourmet.jpg
     
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  6. podmatrix

    podmatrix Active Member

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    debayanmitra Well-Known Member

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  10. atlpworld@rediffmail.com

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  11. blanktorp

    blanktorp Active Member

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    #11
    Thank you all for the submissions. Each design has some very nice elements and some areas for improvement, but I would just like to focus on the top 2 from these proposals - my favorites are podmatrix and natali77

    podmatrix - thanks - I like the style and layout and look. Just some small changes with the size of the text. The "receive limited-time..." can be even larger. The positioning is good, but it is the main informational text/tag-line, so please expand even a bit more. The "sign up to be" should not be so small and almost invisible - please also include it as actual normal message text - can be different font, etc but it should be larger so people can read and see as part of the full message on the landing page. Last, this is small change (and I know that it's only for looks right now in design) but if you can change the text in textbox to just "email address". Thanks.

    natali77 - thanks also for submission - I like yours too, and thanks for trying to have similar font as in logo, but somehow it doesn't work too well especially with the blank white background. Maybe you can change font a bit, and make normal (not so cursive). Also more space between the two text lines please. And also in the text box for email just write "email address". Space things out a bit overall. Thanks.
     
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  12. jh2

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    #12
    Hey,

    I'm not finished as of yet i just wanted some input on where you would prefer the email submission form? Any feedback appreciated.

    Full view: http://i52.tinypic.com/1zf527q.jpg

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    Thanks
     
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    blanktorp Active Member

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    jh2 - thank you for submitting - I really like that banner in back (looks a bit like wood, or brushed metal) - but to be honest I don't think the overall design will rank higher for me than my current 2 favorite ones that I mentioned in previous posts. So thank you very much, but I would not want to take away any more of your time. Just to answer your question anyway: I would push the banner+logo up, then put the "receive limited..." text below on the darker background, have it be a different style/font, and place email sign up below that etc. But once again, I think based on current entries I will chose one of the other 2 that I mentioned.
     
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  14. jh2

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    Thanks for the feedback and good luck with the contest.
     
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  15. superfrankie

    superfrankie Well-Known Member

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    My try ;)

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  18. mx84

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    Feedback please:)
     
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  20. blanktorp

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    #20
    Thank you all for the continued submissions and activity.

    I am surprised that I have a new favorite: sparkle92 - thanks - it's a very nice design and works well for my theme. Small changes are just: (a) in the first tag-line, please put the word "Deal" on the first line; (b) inside the text box, "adress" is with 2x letter d: "address"; (c) if you could maybe try to play around a bit with the colors/contrast/hues etc because right now the logo colors from my logo and the rest of the colors in the design don't match too well - I think there is too much of a contrast with the wood background...I would almost accept this as well, but would be good to see if maybe just overall it can blend better with the logo so it looks more integrated

    My second favorite from the new group of submissions is mx84 - thank you as well - I like that it is elegant and simple, but maybe just a bit too quiet and simple for what I'm looking for. I will be choosing from one of the other 3 favorites but thanks again.

    Thanks to the others as well, but I will be choosing from the current top 3 I have.

    --> Contest will stay open for another 24 hours to see if there is anything new and to wait for the requested changes on my top 3 choices - then I will close.
     
    blanktorp, Dec 27, 2010 IP