Simple church sign contest $20 via paypal. Aiming for 72hrs

Any Type Of Chnage Can Occur....

 

Here is my entry:
The original is 1500mm x 1200mm at 300dpi for printing



Thanks in advance for the feedback!
-Will

 

Posting my entry in a couple of minutes. Just taking a long time to save and upload.

Edit*

Here it is.



Hope you dont mind me taking out the text in the logo. I found it to be redundant since the top part of the poster already says the name of the church. It also took up space that I needed

 

Here is my another go:

 

Hi! This is my new entry!
Hope u like it

 

martalina: it looks good and those are some very pleasant colours you used. Very stylish. The guys had yours in second place. They just happened to like another entry better because of the positioning of the text.

ketanchhabra: thanks for the entry but it's not something they wanted. It is a little busy and the photo while stylish does not match

Retal: thanks for the entry. It looks very stylish and very well positioned and totally agree with the removing of the text around the logo. The only downside is the text/font you used is a little plain

wholetmein: I am sorry but I can't see your entry again. However, the guys on their computer were able to see it and they said they like a couple of other entries better

Minnynaja: thanks for the new one but it is not something they want. It looks a little too colourful and too many different colours. The first one was better except the photos were not appropriate.

willhaynes: they really liked yours and they would like to see one change if possible, and that is to leave everything exactly as it is and just change the blue to a bronze/burgundy colour. Your entry is in the first place at the moment.

If anyone else is considering this, willhaynes is the one to beat and contest will close shortly after willhaynes submits the change of colour.

 

Hopefully its better now

 

Looks good retal but the reason they like willhaynes better is also because of the way the text is positioned looks a little more creative.

 

Glad to hear they liked it! Here's a revised entry



Thanks,
-Will

 

Thanks willhaynes. You are the winner and please pm me for payment.

However, I want to also award a second place of $5 to martalina on one small condition if she agrees: you don't need to send anything accross but simply pm me with that burgundy colour code

Again guys, thanks to everyone who participated. Great effort.