Contest Simple but challenging contest. Must end in 24hrs. Winner gets $30 via paypal

Hello again talented people.

I need a new design done for a protein bag (please see image below). I only need the front of the bag designed. When printed, the bag will be 500mm in height, 210mm in width and the side 110mm (you don't need to worry about the side but only the front 500mm x 210mm).

The logo can be downloaded from here: https://www.wetransfer.com/download...47622760e74ed456a663fcef20130622043116/cec367

The name of the product is: Maxo_WheyC30 (please remove the underscore_I don't want it seen in the search engines).

Underneath Maxo_Whey just write Whey Protein Concentrate

And then separately I need the following:

High in Bioactive Proteins
Rich in Amino Acids
Instantised for easy mixing

Also write somewhere: 30g protein per serving
3kg
Chocolate Royale

Colours: Black, Yellow, White only.
I want something that is easy to read, clean, simple and stylish.

Please try and do better than the examples in the image below.



No pm entries please. I want to end the contest in 24hrs. Winner gets $30 via paypal.

Any questions please ask and please no PM entries.

 

Hi
My Try

if you need any change, let me know.
Thanks,
Mr.Nag

 

Mr.Nag: thanks for getting things started. It's an ok entry but I was expecting a little more. For example the word Maxo_Whey looks much too simple and so does the rest of the text. The background you did is nice but other than that the rest is a little plain.

 

wait for my entry

 

Allright I came up with these:





Feedback would be greatly appriciated. thx

 

My entry:





Preview:

 

Revised

 

anything can be changed according to your feedback..

 

Sorry for the late reply guys. All due to the time difference.

Lots of good entries and I will comment individually but while many aspects look really, really good, the disappointing part was no one seemed to do much with the name of the product which is Ma_xoWheyC30. This was an important part of the design, in a sense it was the most important part, the one that should have stood out the most. Nevertheless I am sure it can be fixed. I think generally speaking no matter what product is being sold, the name of the product should be bigger than the logo (I could be wrong but this is just my general observation when it comes to products packaging).

good designer: Yours is the favorite one so far. It is unanimous (well the three people that saw all the designs anyway) that it looks the best. However, the main problem with yours is the fact that the most important part of the design is missing, which is the name of the product Maxo_WheyC30. Still your entry is #1 so far.

NightVision: really good to see you again. BTW, I visited your country last year and I must say it's a fantastic place to visit. Maybe if I wore a t-shirt with the words proteindude you may have recognised me haha. The same problem as in the past with your design which is I really, really like your work as you know I've complemented you many times. Unfortunately somehow when you enter my contests there are better entries. Which frustrates me because I really like your works. But this time your designs seem a little plain. It's as if you were in a bit of a hurry. The one part of the design I liked is where you put that white effect above and below the black border but other than that I am sorry but it is a bit too plain overall. I like simple designs but not plain.

puttu: really nice and pleasant entry. I like it but it appears somehow too busy. The logo is too big (the logo in this case is not the most important part of the project). The words should have appeared in some type of "groups" to make it easier to read them. And perhaps Maxo_WheyC30 could have been a little more creative. But other than that it is a really strong entry which with a few modifications could be a strong contender. I like the ovals/shapes you used for the background.

killuahxh: thank you for the entry and also thanks for showing the design as a bag as well. Unfortunately it is a little too plain for my liking.

Mr.Nag: thanks for the new entry. Unfortunately it does not look much better than the previous one although I see you did some more work on the name of the product. Even so, it is still a bit plain and the X in the word Max_o looks more like an N.

pheonix89: thanks for the entry. It looks really good. Right now it is in the second place. The general feeling was that the words are perhaps inclined too much. Also Max_oWheyC30 could have been a little bigger as right now the logo seems to overpower it. I think the name of the product should be bigger than the logo. Other than that it looks good. I also like where you wrote 30G protein per serving, it also has some work done to it (a subtle but pleasant effect) rather than just simply writing 30G protein per serving.

Xdexiner: thank you for the entry. It is an ok entry but perhaps a little too plain. I do like the effect/background you gave to the three statements. Other than that it is just a bit plain overall.

 

thanx for feedback

revision

 

good designer: looks good and like I said yours is in the #1 position right now.

Also just confirming this contest will be closed in a few hours from now (about 24hrs from its original starting time) and a winner will definitely be chosen as there are at least two suitable designs.

 

My Try

 

Thanks for your comments
Here is revision entry

 

revised design





anything can be changed according to your feedback..

 

My try.