Contest Simple Business Card Design - $20

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by Matthew Sayle, Apr 1, 2017.

  1. #1
    Looking for a business card design for a local service business.

    I want to make sure St. Louis, Missouri (USA) is the star of the card.

    I was thinking maybe a silhouette of the St. Louis skyline like this: http://www.clipartbest.com/clipart-biyxLeAyT. I would want to replace the St. Louis text with Optimize STL - still with the same font.

    Here's the information I need:

    Business Name: Optimize STL (this can be inside of the skyline)
    Person Name: Matt Sayle
    Business Address: 111 West Port Plaza, Suite 600, St. Louis, MO 63146
    Phone: (314) 420 - 4839
    Email:
    Tagline: Faster, More Affordable Web Design & Digital Marketing
     
    Matthew Sayle, Apr 1, 2017 IP
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    outofblue Greenhorn

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    akosiADV Active Member

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    BUSINESS CARD 12.jpg
     
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  4. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Illustrious Member

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  5. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Illustrious Member

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    #5
    This is pretty decent, however I figured the info would go in the top left corner, where all of the white is.
     
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    #6
    thanks. which info? the address, phone and email?
     
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  7. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Illustrious Member

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    #7
    Yeah, everything. I have other plans for the back of the card.

    Also, after looking at the font for 'Optimize STL' - I am not a fan :)
     
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    #8
    Ok, so the changes would be, the font for Optimize STL would be changed, and the info at the back will be moved to the top left?
     
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  9. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Illustrious Member

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    #9
    I'm not saying you're going to be the winner if those are done. I am just offering feedback.

    Someone could still post a cleaner design and win.
     
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    akosiADV Active Member

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    Of course. I totally understand that. Here's my revision.
    VERSION 2.jpg
     
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  11. Matthew Sayle

    Matthew Sayle Illustrious Member

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    #11
    Love the font for Optimize STL, maybe remove the tagline altogether - I don't think it fits.

    Also, the back should be completely blank. The information should go on the top left of the front.

    We're getting somewhere!
     
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    puttu Notable Member

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    [​IMG] [​IMG]
    Front Back
     
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    thanks. here's my revision
    2.jpg 1.jpg
     
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    Matthew Sayle Illustrious Member

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    #14
    Winner! Winner!

    Looks like there's some white space under the email address and above the skyline - this would be a good spot for a tagline.

    Put the following there is slighly bigger font:

    Faster, more affordable web design

    Also, the address is 111 not 11
     
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    akosiADV Active Member

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    #15
    Thank you! Will make the revision. ^ ^
     
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