I like what you did to her and I like the bottom one's swirl, but I don't like the women in the background and the numbers are important and have to be there.
The colors have to match the theme, and I don't know, but this one is just not right to me. Keep trying.
We're definately getting there.....Can you accent her more? The way the fonts look are still wrong, and it's THATdamnscale.com not THE. But, I REALLY like the idea of the numbers and colors of the background are good now.