short but killer call for action page copy needed

Discussion in 'Content Creation' started by happymondays, Mar 30, 2008.

  1. #1
    Ok, I need a marketing, call for action type text to my FSBO website.
    My website has two forms when it comes to posting an FSBO ad:

    STEP one: free ads
    http://www.ctbillboard.com/hirdetes_feladas.php?form_lang=en

    STEP two: value added services
    http://www.ctbillboard.com/hirdetes_feladas2.php?form_lang=en

    I am not satisfied with the short lead in paragraph on both of the forms. I have a low conversion ratio and I feel it could be better.

    Anything can be changed on the forms in order to make people posting more ad, as long as the suggestion is reasonable...

    Marketing professional - please do make your offer for two short lead-in paragraphs (as long as you feel appropriate) and for any alteration. Images, graphic can added as well, I have very good artists on board. Just help me with the form because I think the second paragraph is too short and understated. I don't need a clickbank style long sales letter, only something in between.

    Please PM me with your offer.
     
    happymondays, Mar 30, 2008 IP
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    pranith Banned

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    I can tell you only one thing , make people to post your URL'S in there signature links in diiferent forums. Even I have done same type of marketing for one o the client.

    For posting in 100 forums he paid me $60
     
    pranith, Mar 30, 2008 IP
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    happymondays Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for that, this time I need page copy, though.
     
    happymondays, Mar 31, 2008 IP