Shoes Brands

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    esauldaris, Apr 19, 2010 IP
  2. Smart618

    Smart618 Peon

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    the site very small I think its better to spride the content a bit
     
    Smart618, Apr 20, 2010 IP
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    Looks pretty good in my eyes just after that first shoe those links should be in a menu or something
     
    MsiDesign, Apr 20, 2010 IP
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    The biggest issue is that you are selling to English speakers, but using an incorrect plural in its name, and have translation issues in the copy. Your website domain name is ok, but you can't call it "Shoes Brands", it should be "Shoe Brands". This is a VERY important distinction. The other issue that I have is the site doesn't scale to the resolution of the browser. This is fine for one-page marketing sites, but doesn't wok well for sites that are setup as stores.

    Additionally, your tagline needs to change: "400 Shoes Brands at ShoesBrands.net an online shoes store to let you shop women's, men's and kid's shoes" will not sit well with English speakers - it looks like a Google translation. Try something like "Shop over 400 popular brands for men, women and children", or something like that. Again, if you intend to sell to the English speaking market, the grammer has to be perfect.
     
    chrkadmin, Apr 20, 2010 IP
  5. esauldaris

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    Wow... thanks for you help about the grammar. I'll try to fix it.
     
    esauldaris, Apr 20, 2010 IP
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    your site is so big after that you never get any PR..........
     
    Interactiveseo, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    This is a nicely presented well organized site that's easily navigated and accessible. The posts on a wide range of shoe related topics are concisely written and contain valuable information, especially for beginner buyers on the net.
     
    China_girl, Apr 21, 2010 IP
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    I don't want to come across as harsh in these reviews, but I have to be honest in my opinion, and my intent is to help as much as I can. Sometimes that comes across as being blunt ;)
     
    chrkadmin, Apr 21, 2010 IP