SEO Help Request

Discussion in 'Search Engine Optimization' started by dfbosso, Aug 31, 2008.

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  1. #1
    Hi,
    Can I get some rewrites for my Title Tag & Description that will get me to at leat page 2?

    My Title: US Green Living Articles & Blog | Make Your Life Greener & More Eco-Friendly!

    My Description: USGreenLiving.com is the Internet source for information and tips concerning anything green, from global warming to wind energy to unsustainable agricultural.
     
    dfbosso, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  2. catanich

    catanich Peon

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    Donald - What you have is good but may I make a suggestion. Go for the keyword phrase "Green Living" and look closer to what your top ten competitiors are doing.

    <title>Green Living : Green Energy Products, Earth Friendly Products And Green Design - Where Natural Green Living, Sustainability Living, Environmentally Earth Friendly And Eco Friendly Products Matter</title>​


    <meta name="description" content="Going Green – Find Green Living Information On Green Energy Products And Natural Sustainable Living. Your Internet Source For Information And Tips Concerning Anything Green, From Global Warming To Wind Energy To Unsustainable Agricultural">​

    PM me for more info.
     
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  3. macG

    macG Well-Known Member

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    If you're title is already listed, I would suggest don't make any changes, however you can use those keywords in other place, just my thought.
     
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  4. jitendraag

    jitendraag Notable Member

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    @Jim: I like most of the suggestions you give on DP. But I don't like this title at all. The title is very long and will be truncated in SERPs thus rendering it useless.
     
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  5. Carl Henry OBS

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    Hi There,

    As the guy previously said the title needs a little work, if you re title is;

    <title>Green Living : Green Energy Products, Earth Friendly Products And Green Design - Where Natural Green Living, Sustainability Living, Environmentally Earth Friendly And Eco Friendly Products Matter</title>

    You should not repeat words as the search engine will pick up the word even if it is in the wrong order, may I suggest the following;

    <title>Green Living|Energy Products|Environmentally Earth Friendly|Design|Natural Living|Sustainability|Eco</title>

    Make your case to visit you (Use Calls To Action) in your description, AND, make certain all of the terms in your title and description appear in real text in context on the home page.

    Best regards,

    Carl Henry
     
    Carl Henry OBS, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  6. izwanmad

    izwanmad Banned

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    yes, I also didn't like it. Its looks a little spam for the title. because the more title you have, the less keyword weight for each word.
     
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  7. JessieJames27

    JessieJames27 Active Member

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    It is very long, I suggest you limit the title tags with 60-65 characters only. :D
     
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    Make your title "Green Living" and concentrate on getting some links from some high ranked Green blogs.

    If you concentrate on the keyword "Green Living" you should see good results.

    J
     
    mintoj, Aug 31, 2008 IP