security website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by silvastar, Aug 26, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi
    Just created a Home Security website for a local business.

    It's pretty basic but covers some key terms in the local area.

    http:www.homesecuritybrisbane.com

    Any ideas to improve are greatly appreciated.

    Thanks.
     
    Last edited: Aug 26, 2010
    silvastar, Aug 26, 2010 IP
  2. MickJagger

    MickJagger Member

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    Please post the link so we can see what you've got so far :)
     
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  3. silvastar

    silvastar Active Member

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    sorry about that. Link has now been added to my original post.
     
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    Just a first impression: what's the rationale for the header background image? First thing that came to my head was a house going up in flames, which wouldn't really go with the idea or protecting. Not to say this will be a typical reaction, but could you share what you are going for?

    All in all, I think it gets the job done. As you have said, it's pretty basic but it's easy to navigate and answers the most common questions easily. I'd maybe change the gray tagline text just below the header to black or something as it isn't too easy to read as is.
     
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    ye, i agree with ajwalsh. Your header beckground image is not related with your niche.
    May be you can give image that have related with security like lock, key or other related image.
     
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    Hey guys...thanks for your feedback.
    The idea of the fire was to represent a true problem with the security solutions being the answer.
    Ie they need to protect their home which combines both home security alarm solutions and fire protection.
    I do agree with you that home security isn't about fire protection but the services offered actually also include
    fire protection.

    I agree with your comment about the gray tagline so I have amended that. Very much appreciated.
     
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