say ur opinion new flash intro

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by tegaratv, Apr 1, 2007.

  1. #1
    i make anew intro to advertizing com

    mega-signs.net :cool:
     
    tegaratv, Apr 1, 2007 IP
  2. thebookish

    thebookish Peon

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    #2
    It has some cool effects and animation, also I didn't really get the message (Just me). And maybe you want to add a sound button for your visitors.
     
    thebookish, Apr 1, 2007 IP
  3. tegaratv

    tegaratv Guest

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    #3
    thanks 4 ur replay :)
    the intro massage is the working comapy
    like blimp, out door advertising
     
    tegaratv, Apr 1, 2007 IP
  4. jawanda

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    I like the overall look and feel of it, but I agree that the underlying message is somewhat hard to understand. During the first 30 seconds or so when the car is just driving and the blimp is going over head, I felt like there should be "more" going on ... maybe some text flying over that tells what the company does, etc. It's a good start!
     
    jawanda, Apr 1, 2007 IP
  5. hip_

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    Quite good, but actually i don't understand the idea of this animation. 2) Maybe you shod make it a little bit shorter?
     
    hip_, Apr 2, 2007 IP
  6. sir_round

    sir_round Active Member

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    #6
    It looks o.k. in the first place but then ( if you allow me to critique your idea ) the main idea stays behind the scenes somehow. Another thing that i didn't quite like was the background. All the buildings look like a metal pieces in a junk yard. The dude driving along is like looking for some spare parts. It isn't clear to the viewer what you're trying to offer. It becomes more or less clear at the very end of the movie. Try to work on your message and create a highly-attractive video message that will be comprehended by many viewers.

    I hope this won't bring you down. I was just trying to provide you with some helpful ideas.

    Regards,
    S.
     
    sir_round, Apr 3, 2007 IP
  7. zeruel

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    it looks good... but i guess you should fix the background lines... it's broken... but the whole intro looks good...
     
    zeruel, Apr 4, 2007 IP
  8. janusic

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    #8
    nice intro... I usually skip them, but that is prety good:)
     
    janusic, Apr 5, 2007 IP
  9. tegaratv

    tegaratv Guest

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    #9
    thanks : /zeruel

    maybe i will change or make nother one with out this lins :)


    thanks : janusic
     
    tegaratv, Apr 5, 2007 IP
  10. EliteFlyers_com

    EliteFlyers_com Active Member

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    the animation is nice, but not enough is going on... i got bored watching it. and again didnt really understand why i was watching it? am i suppose to want snickers? is it a 'climbing-out-of-your-car-while-driving-is-bad' message....? lol
     
    EliteFlyers_com, Apr 5, 2007 IP
  11. Freelance GD

    Freelance GD Well-Known Member

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    i was about to say the same EliteFlyers_com. Intro is pretty cool but its too long. Why not short it. I like the idea.
     
    Freelance GD, Apr 6, 2007 IP