Hi guys, I have been working on this one for a while and now it´s ready to sail. "Family Organic Garden" offers you the possibility of cutting your expenses on stores and supermarkets by growing your own fruits and vegetables in an entirely organic way. This is the only product in it´s niche focused on growing an organic garden for the specific purpose of *saving money*. It´s a niche with a lot of potential for growth. We´re offering a well researched product written by an experienced professional that could change the economy of your home economy forever. Jeannine Davidoff, the author, has been working with organic gardens for more than twenty years and has ample knowledge and experience on how to create an organic garden in any kind of soil with very little money. The eBook also contains exclusive images and descriptions specifically made for it which you won’t find anywhere else. In this time of economical crisis and growing environmental concerns, the number of people who want to change their eating habits radically and reduce their spending on groceries is on the rise. That is why I have decided to offer them this detailed but accessible manual which doesn´t require any prior knowledge about the subject. Sales Screenshots coming soon! *Affiliates Commission:* 75% *Sales page:* http://www.familyorganicgarden.com *Affiliates page:* http://www.familyorganicgarden.com/affiliate.html (banners, keywords, and more) *Clickbank link:* http://YOURID.garden21.hop.clickbank.net If you have questions or doubts, please comment, PM me or contact me at info at ebooks21 dot com
Great!! I give you 10/10. I'm sure this one is gonna climb up in no time!! Remember my word. Good luck for this and count me in too..
Nice looking page you have there, is this your own work or PLR? Might be worth some deeper investigation!
Well done - it looks really nice. I completely understand Jacky's enthusiasm in the post above. However, you urgently need the sales page to be edited/proofread by someone whose first language is English. There are too many mistakes of grammar, syntax and even spelling at the moment for me to list them all. I'm not saying this to be "pedantic" or to complain about it, but simply because the whole thing looks so good that it's a great shame for it be spoiled by some of the terrible, clumsy English. It's very obvious that the sales page was either originally written in another language and translated by someone whose first language isn't English, or just written by a foreign copywriter whose English isn't nearly as good as he thought. It's not a big job at all to make the necessary changes, and it will improve the page and the conversions dramatically! The other tiny change I'd make, myself, is that I'd remove the little line that says "as seen on YouTube, Google, MSN" at the top. It doesn't add credibility or plausibility. It makes people think that the writer's trying to fool them, and therefore it makes them suspicious. When you're trying to sell something to someone, the very last thing you want them to think is that you're trying to fool them: it detracts seriously from your credibility and plausibility. It's one of those things that everyone copies from everyone else who does it. The people who actually split-test it always discover that their conversion-rate is a little bit higher by removing it! Good luck!
Thanks all for your kind comments. I´ll split the icons as soon as i have time. The sales page was written by Jeannine who lives in South Africa so it will be improved with time. Feel free to PM me with any other suggestions.
@alexa: I understand what you think.. You saw the salespage with the eyes of a writer as well as a marketer but I just had a overall view of the page and it seems really nice!!
Dude its a pretty damn good niche, i was in fact looking for a CB product like yours for my gardening site. Looking forward to send you some serious traffic.
Hey, I don't say this too often, but great job! I like the look of the page and the niche is definitely good. I also really like your headliner: "Learn How To Save Thousands of Dollars a Year by Growing Your Own Organic Garden With My Fully Illustrated Guide." Good job