Salespage Critique

I'm not an expert in salespage designing, nor copywriting. I need your help! Can anybody please provide suggestions on what i should do with my salespage. Every comment will be taken into consideration. Also, is my headline good enough, or is there a better one you could think of. I feel that I'm giving out the wrong message. I think many people will think its only a list of digital products, when it is also products that my team members and I create.

-thanks

website: www.plrebookclub.com

 

Your salespage looks nice, maybe u should remove the captcha.

 

thank you very much. any tips for an improved copywriting headline. also, the captcha is there to prevent spam. shouldn't i leave it there or no?

 

looks good
but I advice to replace your blue background with other color.
8/10 from me

 

The site takes long time to load due to the images and banner is too large in size.Other than it looks fine.

 

The images took little bit time for loading and also the site took too long to scroll, check it and try to decrease the content..

 

1, 1st work on all the images i think you images size most of your image size is now 76 kb work out on that make it small size)

2 work on your html and side border loading time

good luck for you site

thanks
dinesh

 

Site looks pretty good to me although the text formatting could be improved slightly - Some seems to be centered, some seems to be marginised to the left - Needs to be a uniform format.

 

The problem is the homepage and the header picture is not getable.
The visitors can't say what the site sells within 3 seconds it see the page .
Try to make it clear and let visitors know what you are selling within 3 seconds, the head pictures and head titles are important .