Sales page help

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  1. #1
    Hi everyone.

    Over the last few days I've received some massive amounts of traffic to my product. However, because of my silliness, I forgot to put an email capture form.

    Even without that, my special ClickBank folder on my email program remained empty of new sales notifications.

    Can you please help me with my sales page to make it sell more? (Assume the price will stay the same, although I'm planning to test some different price points).

    URL: http://great-info-products.com/Driving-Test.php

    Thank you very much,
    nadavs
     
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  2. alexs464

    alexs464 Well-Known Member

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    Hey, nadavs!

    I looked at your product before and I thought it was cool... although I haven't done any research on the niche - I would assume that this kind of product is in demand - especially for $47.

    Now, I launched a product few months ago that failed miserably - mostly because of the poor sales page. I ve had a pro marketer look at it and he pointed out SO many things that I was not able to see...

    My point... There is no quick or easy way to create a "killer sales page". This is something that people learn during years... of course there are a few genius salesmen - but most have to learn.

    I wish I could help you with it - but I am clueless. Good Luck,

    Alex
     
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    Swerd Active Member

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    step 1. Give it it's own domain
     
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    Step 2: check what your competitors in this same market are doing
     
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    flip Peon

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    nadavs - is this dead? i tried pulling up, but browser keeps timing out
     
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  6. nadavs

    nadavs Active Member

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    The host had a downtime, but now it's back online.
    nadavs
     
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    TorchedSEO Well-Known Member

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    You change colors too often and they don't blend in well, it really makes your site look like a fly by night operation only out to make cash. Stick to the standard white, black, blue, and red. As for your copy I think you need to personalize it more and rearrange a few things, stick to the AIDA formula:

    Attention
    Interest
    Desire
    Action
     
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    exactly; I found that out when I was setting up opt-ins for email. If you have to much color, you are going to get there attention, but not the right kind. You have to suck them in (as evil as it sounds). If you were selling that product door to door, or person to person, exactly how would you describe it in words? I know you can't show videos etc... but try to have more of an interesting voice in your writing.
     
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    TorchedSEO is absolutely right. Personalize it, and include the AIDA formula.
     
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    nadavs Active Member

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    Thank you all for your tips.
    I changed the page now, please tell me what you think.
    nadavs
     
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    TorchedSEO Well-Known Member

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    Still too much green, orange, and yellow
     
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    1. put a header on it. This is a site that would need to seem professional as it is an instruction manual.
    2. I would lose the "about the author" box. Saying that you are an experienced driver since 15.5 is like trying to sale a cook book and saying You've been cooking your whole life. - So has 100,000,000 other people.

    3. I would take my test and if I failed look for help. I think you could use one of the greatest motivators out there for your site. Fear.

    I did a quick search on driving test failure rates and found out that 60% of people fail their driving test. here is a link http://www.dsa.gov.uk/Documents/publications/A4_Pass_Rates.pdf

    You could use this in your title like

    Did You Know That 60% of People Fail Their Driving Test?

    Find out how you can pass your test on the first try.

    - this is just off the top of my head but it would get me to at least read on.
     
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    I would set the width to an absolute width not a percentage. On my monitor it looks atrocious. A width of 950px is good for everyone as that is pretty much the standard resolution now.

    Have a big headline that captures peoples attention.

    The first picture on the right needs to be fixed as it is not contained with your div.

    Remember that you're trying to sell a solution not a product. I always keep that in mind when I'm writing. It will do wonders for your conversions as well.

    I'm tired of failing my driving test - headline

    You start out with "I failed my driving test twice"

    I couldn't figure out what was wrong.

    I kept reading the book, getting help.

    I decided to find out what I needed to know about passing my test. I talked to driving instructors etc. etc.

    I put all of that information in a book.

    2 testimonials

    buy here.

    Newsletter as a window pop up from aweber. People views on this differ, but I like doing that.

    Hope this helps.
     
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