Contest Sales Page Design: $250 - second place gets a bonus too!

Dont worry!

My entry is on halfway, but ..

Decemeber is too far! Please make like 2 week or 3 week like that!

 

another try

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/4241/autralianwholesaler3.jpg

 

Hi, I've posted my entry but it didn't show up. I hope I didn't double post.

Anyway, here is my entry,

http://i736.photobucket.com/albums/xx5/vashadesign/awminisitev1.jpg

Waiting for feedback.

 

Another you.. i mean, another try

Here

 

My Entry!!

 

This is my design, waiting for your comments...

http://khirthan.webs.com/photos/5/australia .jpg

 

Ok! Things are picking up! Thanks guys! I appreciate your efforts!
** Please read my comments and also look at the example before - I will add it here as well - keep reading for general comments at the end**

@stardesigns99 : I don't think I mentioned December. I agree though, it's too far. In a week's time tops I should have a winner. Your design: Remove the bright colors. READ my comments before and after here, look at my example!
Remove the dollars (especially US), add a lot more items, get rid of the Coca-Cola font! Arghhhh!!...... LOL

@mantero: The best so far! remove the US dollars!... Put the products on one side and the text on the other, add more products. Remove the dark bands. Keep it simple!! send a couple of mockups. etc.....

@vashadesign: Not bad. I need the Australian part of the flag to show more and not just the British. Your items look "patched up", add a lot more and make them blend nicely. Go easy with the bright colors.

@buncoh: I don't get the joke.... Nice try bu you need to "spice it up" ! read my general comments.

**** PLEASE READ ****
Forget about buttons and maybe testimonials. I'll give you examples to follow (and make your life easier) later, once we fix our main design, for now concentrate on the main design.

Guys: If you think the money is not enough please tell me so! I believe I am VERY generous. Again, go on the WarriorForum and see the *specialists* on sales pages charge between $97-$120 for one with buttons, testimonials, ecovers. I offer $200 + $50 !!! The least you can give me is a couple of mockups! Don't just give me one!!!!! come on! Be professional!
Also, READ my comments and look at the example I sent you. Don't tell me that it doesn't look nice. Try to follow it VERY closely but also ADD your own talent and compliment it. It's not so hard!...
Here it is again: http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/9104/capturepx.jpg

I have experience and I am looking for professionals!! I have two more projects desperately waiting.
Put talent, effort and create something nice. You will be rewarded! Do NOT "patch up" ! I can tell when people get lazy and patch things up and I cannot stand it! Most site designs here on DP go for $100 - $150, I offer $200 + $50 so the second place did NOT waste their time! I respect people's hard work - just dont give me ugly un-professional stuff.
Put the EFFORT to think and capture what we are selling and to who! I see US dollars from most of you!.. this is australia! Forget about the money but since you decided to put it GO to the effort of finding Australian dollars!
Duhhh....

Regarding the CSS: Don't worry ! It will be 10% of your effort!! Why? Because I have specific examples where we will simply copy the exact CSS! The same applies for the testimonial boxes and the BuyNow "box". So don't worry about this till later.

Thanks for all your efforts !!! Keep them coming !

_S_

 

@Khirthane: Too far - read my comments and retry.

thanks!

 

http://khirthan.webs.com/photos/5/australia1 .jpg

http://khirthan.webs.com/photos/5/australia2 .jpg

if this both themes are far for you, please say what mistake did i make in this and say the corrections also..

 

@Khirthane:
I prefer #2 becuase of the light blue but still far from what i had in mind.
You obviously did not "study" my previous posts ... since i mentioned there:
- Add a LOT of products and "blend" them nicely!
- i don't want the top graphic too tall because I need the main top paragraph to be INSIDE the fold !
- Get it close to the example i gave you!
etc.

To improve
- remove the "wave" on top of the graphic and make the whole top graphic "shorter" a bit.
- add a nicer font AND a handwritten font for the name
- make the "main" part (inside where all the test will go ) white

Before you continue make sure you really study my previous posts ! it will definitely help you understand.

Thanks
_S_

 

Thanks for the feedback, I'll post revised design right away.

PS. We only focus to header and footer right now?

 

yes, ony header and footer for now, like i mentioned ...

 

Feedback please - here

 

@buncoh: A lot of improvement! good job!


While I wait for others try to:
Give me a couple of variations (especially with the flag part)
Remove the cooking spoon! lol
Try to add the : "As Seen" part

Keep it up!!!

 

lol. Kitchenware

Oh. i forgot.

 

Revised. Here

 

Here is my first entry:


Let me know what you think and I will incorporate any feedback promptly. I can start on the other page elements as soon as the header and footer are approved.

 

@buncoh:
Even better!
dont be lazy though ..... -

a few variations maybe, where e.g. the top background stripe is not across the whole screen. Top graphic bg color is less dark blue and the australian map show a bit more, etc. etc.
Make the camera a bit smaller maybe and add an iPhone.

You are the designer: Do your magic!

Give me a bit of time since other people are in Asia and there is a time difference. Tomorrow morning EST (?)

After this last round of the header and general outlook, I'll give you the examples for the optin, testimonials and Add to Cart. So wait for this so that everybody can start fresh. This part should not be too long.
I would say one week for everything? maybe less.

@SalahStudios:
Too flashy ! look at my posts and other designs to get a better feel of what i want.
Thanks for your entry !!

Keep it up !!

 

Revision - Here

*Oh idea, come to papa!

 

here is my update in ur requirement...

http://khirthan.webs.com/photos/5/australia3 .jpg