Sales Letter Review Needed- The £1500 Guide

Discussion in 'Websites' started by raymond222, May 3, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hello,
    Can you- copywriting 'gurus' as well as other webmasters provide a little info about your feelings and thoughts about my short sales letter.
    It is http://www.moneyisfreeonline.com
    What do you think I need to improve?
    How fast does the page load?
    Do you get the meaning of my product?
    Every single opinion will be highly valued :)
    I can provide a review copy for the product to some trusted DP members to get real testimonials and opinions, but thats another discussion. Will post that later on.
    Do you think i need testimonials at all for a small product like this (It's £5) ?
    Thank you very much.
    Chris Willow
     
    raymond222, May 3, 2008 IP
  2. raymond222

    raymond222 Active Member

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    #2
    Come on people, im not asking for a detailed review, just for some quick thoughts and opinions.
    BTW i am not trying to sell you anything, i am looking for a way to improve my sales letter.
    Thanks and sorry for bump
     
    raymond222, May 4, 2008 IP
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    adam1987 Well-Known Member

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    you better watch out the queen doesnt ask for royalties for using her picture.
     
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    adam1987 Well-Known Member

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    Can i have a review copy please.
     
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    Looks pretty cool, nice graphics and to the point. Nice job!
     
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    Thanks!
    That's actually a British Pound laid over the whole header...
    Adam, Pm'ed you
     
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