Sales Letter Critique for Information Product

Discussion in 'Websites' started by sebastya, Feb 4, 2007.

0
  1. #1
    Hey Guys,

    I need some help with my website, in particular the sales letter that I have up. I've only had around 120 visitors so far to the website with no CPC campaigns running atm, but I was hoping by now I would have made at least one sale.

    Could anyone critique the sales letter, or anything else in general that will help?

    URL is http://www.BeLikeRonaldinho.com

    Thanks
     
    sebastya, Feb 4, 2007 IP
  2. 8everything

    8everything Peon

    Messages:
    16,350
    Likes Received:
    903
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #2
    I can critique on the design.. I think if you designed the site, it may help you! Especially to something that looks professional. Sales pages are tough, but a nice design would really help it.
     
    8everything, Feb 4, 2007 IP
    sebastya likes this.